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AGE: 36
LOC: West Islip, NY
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: December 31

ah, what to say… i wrote my first poem when i was 13 years old. i put a bunch of ryhming four-line stanzas on a page, then tore them into sections and re-arranged them until i liked the flow. boy, were those early poems terrible. then, from my senior year in HS into my early (and fleeting) college career, it dawned on me that poetry didn’t have to rhyme. it didn’t need set stanzas. then, the flow came easier for me. i’ve worked some really unstructured rhymes back in during this last burst of inspiration. they seem to pop up all over the place now.
a college friend, who is a writer and artist, helped me put together a book of my writing. it’s called “paper airplanes.” he wrote it out by hand (all 200 pages of it) with illustrations. ...

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Poetry / Circus Drive
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CIRCUS DRIVE i'm planning a trip, and soon to try and find the forest through the trees, my fear of strange bugs and snakes be damned. i'm working on a theory about that common fright, assuming that the crazy way they move is what causes the discomfort... quick and sideways, up and down backwards and all wrong to our eyes and our defenses. i'm most surely not long for this journey i've talked about for years but never actually completed. i always get spooked and turned around. i never get to ...
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Poetry / HOPE'S INN
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HOPE’S INN i woke up in some strange place, his beautiful face thisclose to mine. and through his smile,he kissed the tip of my nose, my forehead, and i felt blessed but confused, too tired and used. i have this strange view of the room and the indifference that looms as my eyes open slowly to see what i know to be true. and i have this alternate theory of you and me, since i've been both the center of your universe, on a pedestal too high to breathe in the breathtaking view of you, and i hav...
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Poetry / Silly Asides
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SILLY ASIDES Tell me again how you play with me. Explain to me why what I say matters. Answer my calls, and break my falls when I Can't hold on for myself. How I've come to need you, I could always explain. Maybe you never knew the effect, the affectations Each laugh holds for my imagination Hold on for the ride, and I mean it all the time. Over and over we run for the fun of it. Wet from the rain, or alone once again. Together, we find some place Over some mountains we never climb alone. Loo...
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THE THOUGHT ON THE STAIRS by its nature, the idea of "finished" cannot ever be fixed, in style or substance. and i'm often struck with the truth of the physics lesson you taught me all those years ago, about the glass that can't be unbroken once it falls off the table and shatters. the energy that brings it down will not reverse itself and make the glass whole again. like life and time and wisdom, they are all bells that can't be unrung, one-way roads and songs that can't be unsung. knowing h...
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Poetry / Little Shock
between the twins and the gift in your hand, i can suppose you never really needed the gun... the imagery and the strength in this is something to be read over and over again. a starting point for an interesting discussion in how to make sure girls know there is nothing lacking. their strength, their roars are INSIDE.
Poetry / Metanoia
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Poetry / Inter Alia
magnetism works in mysterious ways, doesn't it? the last line was so intimate, and sad. i really enjoyed this.
Poetry / The Longing
this was so perfect to me, on so many levels (except you misspelled lattes) ha. longing, people watching and writing are three of my favorite things. and so i've been in this place, a coffee shop mentioned once, a bar next to the train station, the restaurant an old friend owned... wherever the place is, we all find a way to get back there, longing for a new step forward but not being able to take it. and i've sped home to write, afraid i'll lose one genius line in my head. i could see all of...
i really liked this, it reads very well-is it intentional, the lack of space between the herewheres? if so, it's really clever that way. no spaces. if it was an accident, hell, leave it in... but, i would but a "the" in before "sum." otherwise, this was a great piece.
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