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Talent hidden in my stories unwritten.
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Writer's block:Frustration. Bestselling writer:Inspiration.
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Pencil.Check.Paper.Check.Ideas.Uhhh….
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We arrived in the parking lot twenty minutes pass the time I was supposed to be there. All thanks to the insane traffic of Atlanta, Georgia. The car came to a smooth halt inside a handicap parking space. My dad, Brandon, pulled out an old handicap tag from the passenger side compartment. The tag once belonged to my Grandpa Mike who recently stayed with us until my parents had grown tired of his midnight streaking through the neighborhood, and decided a nice retirement home would suit him best...
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The night was young and the moon and stars lit up the sky. Auburn leaves rustled around outside in the courtyard. A cold autumn breeze flowed gently through the stain glass windows. Inside the room was filled with golden furniture that glittered in the candlelight. A little girl hummed quietly a lullaby while playing in her vanity mirror. A young woman who was probably in her early twenties entered the room. Her face went from calm to mortified when she saw what the child was doing. “Princes...
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I liked the quote. I think it packs a lot of meaning in one sentence.
I liked how you wrote this poem and that it told a story. Although I don't know exactly what the story is about except from your note. That's probally because I'm not familiar with parent hood but I think that someone who is will probally grasp this and like this more. I think you are a great writer I just didn't understand the concept.
I really like this poem. It displays a problem that many people including myself have. I don't think was entirely laugh out funny but it was definitely interesting. Good luck with your writing!
I think did great on this piece of writing. I was really able to grasp the pain that the poem is showing. I think like how you have a ryhme scheme at the beginning but it doesn't take over the whole poem. I think this is a great and could be published.
I think you did a very good job with being descriptive. I think it's wonderful how depict spring seeing as it is the prettiest season. Keep writing!
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