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Poetry / LOST: innocence
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15 Reviews   3 Comments
LOST: innocence Are my truly carefree days truly behind me? Have the worries of these last four seasons killed my child? I’d like to think not. I think I just got separated from him Somewhere in my mind he’s at the lost and found And my subconscious is paging Mr. Rowan “Please come to the center of your mind.” “We believe we have a little boy of yours!” Then again maybe not Maybe this sick darkness has taken him hostage It’s possible that this affliction of mine has ensnared him Stifling his ...
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Version 1
14 Reviews   0 Comments
You’re a hurricane that tore through my life and in Your wake left 1,000 smiles and as many laughs. Good times became great memories From a hurricane, a fireball, its what I need You’re chaos was enlightening Even borderline frightening You opened my eyes to what is possible in life Fearless, unabashed and embracing strife I don’t regret a second of the storm Because it was born again new every morn Winds will blow and waters will rise I can’t get over the fire in your eyes Passion, fury, dis...
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Poetry / whispers
Not bad but not great. I found the imagery a bit bland and the choice of words like soul and mind a bit cliche. As i said though not bad and i would say keep it up but strive to expand your wording a bit more.
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