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LOC: Australia
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You sit there staring at me With your ears perked up in the air Staring aimlessly into space Not a care in the world Running along a road Your Tongue hanging out the side Chasing a car Only you know why Lying down on a rug Your wet nose up against mine Slowly you drift asleep Awaiting your next walk
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knowledge is something that can be obtained but wisdom must be earned.
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the internet has some very good ideas and will one day control all of our minds but until that day we can keep living the illusion that is life and hope that one day YODA will come down from the sky and free us all from our free will
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You sit there staring at me With your ears perked up in the air Staring aimlessly into space Not a care in the world Running along a road Your Tongue hanging out the side Chasing a car You have no idea why Lying down on a rug Your wet nose up against mine Slowly you drift asleep Awaiting your next walk
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The opening sound a lot like a level from the first god of war game, with the gods laying wastes to cities and such. the whole things sounds like a hybrid of lord of the rings and god of war. a hybrid is normally better ad this piece is such a case. a little more detail in the main characters would be good. i look foward to reading more.
just done done it once or twice or more, is there superposed to be two "done" in there? I'm all for applying the force and all but whats a ellipse? could you please explain this two me, thanks but all in all a good piece of work.
this would make a very good book for little people(children), even with out the aid of pictures i could visualize what was happening in this, poem/story. great work.
of the many children's books i have read never i have i read on that didn't start off with Once upon a time, aw well, why change what works. this is a good piece, i actually read this to my little sister, she really loved it. keep up the good work.
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