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LOC: Taunton, MA
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"I Never Knew" As soft music soothes the air People soon gather and fill up the hall More people than I could imagine More people than I could ever recall Between me and you, I Never Knew I never had a clue, God I Never Knew People dressed in their church cloths File by me with grace and respect Feeling like I am someone special Is the last thing I would ever expect Between me and you, I Never Knew I never had a clue, God I Never Knew Bridge; That I was as good as anyone That I should never ...
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Without my writing, I'm left alone.
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Brokenhearted writers are left emotionally bankrupt.
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Now be honest, and just lie.
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All words once written become immortal.
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hi there, i thought this was a very creative, poetic poem, well written...the only thing i could suggest to make it better is that you add the title somewhere in the poem so it stands out and is remembered..you want people to know the name of something they like..:)...especially if their interested in your work!...:)''later, jim
hi there, how true...i think i woulda said, are endless than is, but either way it's a nice one...:)jim
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