cindergirl6's profile
AGE:
26
LOC: Haines City, FL
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: October 31
LOC: Haines City, FL
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: October 31
My name is Aimee and I am a 26 year old wife and mother of a beautiful 6-year-old princess named Gracielou. I am also a Firefighter/EMT in Florida. I am a published poet and have a 4 part family saga in the works. My goal is to find a literary agent who is interested in a Historical family saga about the Bryant’s of South Georgia during the American Civil War. I also write inspirational pieces for Firefighter’s and Emergency Medical professionals as well as the average person.
I am Hebrew by birth and Christian by Faith. So don’t be surprised to find that reflected in my works.
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Five Six miles North of Richmond , Virginia May 24, 1864 Tom sat at...
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Three Callao, Virginia April 7, 1864 Tom tied Lancelot to a post outside of a pub just ...
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Two Aiken, South Carolina January 26, 1864 Snow began to fall upon the roof tops of the buildings in a small ...
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I find this well done and humorous. Now I'm hungry,lol. My only suggestion is for you to begin with the punctuation that you end with. Other than that I love it. Well done.
So much anger with a bit of humor mixed within. I really like your style. So, this review is much like my others...like,like,like...so I'll spare you. My only suggestion is maybe give us more thoughts from Eli and Gabby. Their characters are so interesting that I want to know more of what's going on with them. Other than that, I look forward to reading more.
Wow! So, what's with the apology at the beginning in your description. You have an excellent voice, keep using it. My only suggestion is maybe try a new format and perhaps it will flow better.
I like this very much but I almost feel like something is left unsaid. Like one more paragraph is needed. But for what you have said, it is very deep and well said. "Careworn","care-worn" All-in-all, great job. You have a voice and use it well.
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