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AGE: 28
LOC: Willingboro, NJ
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: February 11

i’m black, babyfaced, buxom, and bisexual. 25, and from south jersey.

my personal writing can be very raw at times. i don’t dig grammatical tyranny, and that’s that.

i am into anything involving the five senses…touching angels & demons, tasting flesh, tracing sound, creating dreams, living free, writing out my soul, and observing strangers on a train. jeah.

what am i not into? racism, sexism, and probably a whole lot of other -isms. except cynicism…cause yep, i can be quite cynical at times. can you blame me? look around. shit.

i appreciate constructive criticism. always open to improve as a writer…♥

my current favorite lyrics
i looked at my reflection in the water
thought what an unlik… (more)

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Non-fiction / When Life Unfolds Her Mystery...
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water gushed from the sky and wet her face. raindrops on her pretty lashes blurred everything including the truth. still she heard the wailing, that siren of agony...the warning perhaps of what was to come.......but how could she have taken heed to anything when everything was a mere stain of color, a catastrophe drenched in surreal undertones not yet perceivable..... ......................... five years later, i sat facing her...clasping her hand on my knee as she shared her dream with me. "...
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Non-fiction / Valentine
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we drove to the riverfront, parked near the trees. our presence in sync with the sunset...beauty in the breakdown. there were brilliant hues of salmon pink and fire gold tonguing the sun goodbye...a sky sorbet so aesthetically sweet with its colorful waves; made me wanna lick celestial dreams for hours. fascinated with the sky...wishing we could fuck on the prettiest biggest cloud, wishing we could fly...if only for a little while- a day...or lifetime. when nightfall came...couples strolling ...
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Haiku/Senryu / After Truth Pushed Us Down the Stairs
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dead in the toilet, a crimson mass of pretense; miscarry, we did
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Haiku/Senryu / Virgin
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naked and naive hopes of affection deceive; she opens her legs
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Haiku/Senryu / Loyalty
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her own destiny woven into his lifelines... to die together
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Quotes / I Pissed God Off
by onlywish
hmm. well, my guess is...it's cause she has a wicked sense of humor...and probably likes watching us scurry around like mice in this crazy, cruelly built maze called life ;).
Haiku/Senryu / cheap with the creds
by berzerkkenobi
ha! now there's some urbis humor for ya. this is a witty little piece of writing, but it's not traditional haiku. it should be in a 5-7-5 syllable format instead of 7-5-7. if this was intentional for whatever reason, ignore me.
Haiku/Senryu / Springtime Happiness
by cram
this is traditional haiku, which i can appreciate. great imagery; it reminds me of wandering around a spring/summer garden, seeing such a scene. simple yet sweet. good job.
Poetry / To mock the truth
by Durian
we're all clowns, but we hate this one cause he's wearing his ugliness on the outside while we're cowardly hiding ours on the inside. we hate him, we kick him, cause he's a tragic joke...a mirror we can't break. i so love your imagery in this poem. goddamn. great work. the message is simple yet profound.
Haiku/Senryu / WINTER
by Wituckatron
i love the imagery here, and i can also appreciate the fact that this is traditional haiku. but this poem not only has to do with nature; it describes the mood many of us take on during winter. when winter comes, it often brings a bit of melancholy with it. it's like the incredibly cold air dampens our spirit or something. the line "frozen fire fly" reminds me of a person feeling alone and cold, waiting for the first taste of summer sun/love again. perhaps i'm reading too much into it, but i ...
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