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This leave alot to the readers imagination. I like that alot. Almost as if The reader can personlize it to thier own expierance. It is well written and really captures ones attention. The line " A tragic misconception leaving behimd empty resentment" That is brillant..
Adorable! Yes you are nuts. You have done a wonderful job of portraying crazy, with out seeming crazy. I think they should lock up who ever doesn't think trees are friends. I did rather enjoy this. I chuckled and found that it was a very fun poem to read. I especially like you part on what you would say to a tree, really cute and well done. thank you
I love this story. I will keep it short and sweet. I wouldn't change a thing. Lenny seems like a real smart ass and I love the way Diana visualized Lenny as an Eagle band memeber.(just my perception). The story flows wonderfully and sucks the reader in from the first paragraph. Hmmm! contructive critism huh? Space twice after a period when starting a new sentance. Thats all I could come up with to change. 10's Bravo.
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