chasingdreams1's profile
AGE:
17
LOC: Lagrange, GA
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: November 29
LOC: Lagrange, GA
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: November 29
My name is Traci, I want to be a writer or a actress. I constantly write and instead of saving my writing I toss them. Now that I have this account I can save and recieve reviews. Thank you to anybody who has anything to say. I take critisism well, so dont’t think it will hurt my feelings. Uhm…. I don’t have much to say about myself, just about my writings… enjoy:)
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I force you out of my mind and with ease you storm back in it, please tell me why you stert things that you're not willing to finish? I fought my weakness of the love give for letting you inside again, my addiction towards you is my biggest problem, desire and sin. I can't turn you down because you've had me from the start, from the moment we met you possesd my mind, body and heart. I should have kept my guard up and I should have said no, because now that I've had you I can't seem ...
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I say I've moved on until I'm reminded of you. The things that you said, the things that you'd do... I ignore the feeling that continues to taunt me. The memories wont fade, my heart refuses to set my mind free... The confusion is weighing heavily and growing deeper by the minute, dream and hold on or wake up and let go? My mind can't make the decision because my hearts to far in it... I hate feeling love sick and left here alone. I want to tell you how I feel, but you're with her a...
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I guess love truely and undeniably is pain, but you will continue to go through it for that one person. Through all the arguing, fussing, fighting, and crying you wont give up until that person is back into your arms and the bad converts to the good you remember. Realizing you need somebody just hoping, dreaming, and waiting for the day they realize they need you too. Though it kills you more and more each day you live to see their smile, even if your not the reason behind the smile anymore. ...
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Learning to walk comes after learning to crawl... But before you can walk of course your going to fall, if babies don't give up why would you?
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Your right, this is another strong poem! I really like the first line, "I abandoned truth to believe someone loved me." I shook my head in amazement when I read it because it's what most people do when they have a desire for love and want it quickly instead of waiting for it... Kudos to the writer!!!!! :)
Nice, but I don't think it should be in young adult section... I think this is read more like a poem or a journal, blogg, or diary type writing.
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