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AGE: 39
LOC: Browns Summit, NC
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: May 11

I am a 36 year old mother of three. I enjoy reading and writing poetry. I hope you enjoy reading my work.

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Humor/Satire / My Little Dare Devil
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The youngest of my three children was my little dare devil with her cute blond curls. She has always been the dare devil one. No matter how dangerous it may be she was always the first to try.  She felt she had to prove herself to her two older brothers. Which made me a nervous wreck.  My little dare devil being a big girl (so she thought) saw my glass of tea sitting on top of the counter in the kitchen. She decided she wanted some. She dragged her high chair over to ...
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Trisha with her cute blond curls. She has always been the dare devil one. No matter how dangerous it may be she was always the first to try. Trisha being a big girl (so she thought) saw my glass of tea sitting on top of the counter in the kitchen. She decided she wanted some. She dragged her high chair over to the counter. Then she began to climb. The high chair was not quite close enough to my drink. As she reached out to get the glass, her arms were not long enough to grab it, she knocked&...
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Humor/Satire / The Dare Devil
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Trisha with her cute blond curls. She has always been the dare devil one. Trisha being a big girl (so she thought) saw my glass of tea sitting on top of the counter in the kitchen. She decided she wanted some. She dragged her high chair over to the counter. Then she began to climb. The high chair was not quiet close enough to my drink. As she reached out to get the glass, her arms not long enough to grab it. She knocked the glass over. It crashed to the floor and broke. As the glass fell, th...
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Humor/Satire / The Dare Devil
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Trisha Trisha a very smart 3 year old. With her cute blond curls. She has always been the dare devil one. Trisha being a big girl (so she thought) saw my glass of tea sitting on top of the counter in the kitchen. She decided she wanted some. She dragged her high chair over to the counter. Then she began to climb. The high chair was not quiet close enough to the glass of tea. As she reached out to get the tea, her arms not long enough to grab it. She knocked the glass over. It crashed to the f...
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Humor/Satire / The Obedient Two Year Old
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I must say my younger brother, CJ, listened very well to my parents. My Mom was in the kitchen cooking lunch one Sunday afternoon when my younger brother was only 2 years old. He kept getting underfoot as my mom would say. She told him to go out side with his daddy. Well needless to say he went. Dad was working under the old car (that was always breaking down). He said to my little brother "Go in the house with your Momma, I'm busy and can't watch you." So he did as he was told Momma said " ...
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Novel Treatments / A Distant City, Pt. 2
There were so many vacant, abandoned buildings in the city, and so much waste created that was no need to pay for rent, food, or clothing. I would have put the word "was" between "waste" and "created", a coma between created and that and after "that" I would have put "there". We had covered the windowsills and electric outlets in a roll of blue tape that Andrew had shoplifted from a hardware store. I would ahve put "with" instead of "in". and now weed grew up around them ( add a s to weed) be...
I liked the way you combined description with conversation. made it easy for me to follow the story. I have a hard time reading stories that are all conversation or all descriptive. Can't wait to read more.
Children's / Bacon or Sausage?
“Oh how graceful she looked!” though Bacon. Should be thought not though. Cute story. But would have been funnier if bacon didn't have any coins to steal,
Non-fiction / Dear Dad
I hate when friends are right at the expense of my being correct. In This sentence shouldn't you have used the word incorrect if your friend was right? This is a heart felt letter to your dad, I have to agree with your friend "so what" He was there for you, which is more than I can say for most men. As For you Step Mom she was just letting you know that your father loved you so much that he chose to take care of you no matter what. respect her for that and love her for being there also. I am...
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