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22
LOC: Barbourville, KY
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: December 05
LOC: Barbourville, KY
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: December 05
I’m 18 years old and I’m a pre-med/psychology major.
I love to read. I learned to read only shortly after I turned 3, so it has always been important to me.
During my middle school years, I was tortured. I went to a private school and kids were cruel. I didn’t have the haircut or the clothes, therefore, I didn’t have the fun or the friends.
In highschool, I blossomed. I became everything I wanted to be and more.
Now, in college, I’m scared to death. I spent so long trying to find out how to be what other people desired for me to be, that I didn’t find out who I wanted “me” to be. Finally, I am slowly finding “me.”
So far, I know that “me” is complicated, opinionated, and strong. I love people and I love to work hard. “Me” like…
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We attended a funderal that day, as friends, and upon leaving, decided to go for a drive. That drive, lasting 6 hrs. and 4 bathroom stops, became the first of many. During the first half hour, we spotted something that would become the center of many memories to come: a light blue volvo, driven by an elderly man with teased and tossled white hair. He drove at a slumbering speed which turtles would consider slow. But for some reason this scene seemed to intrigue me and out of a longing to end ...
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We attended a funderal that day, as friends, and upon leaving, decided to go for a drive. That drive, lasting 6 hrs. and 4 bathroom stops, became the first of many. During the first half hour, we spotted something that would become the center of many memories to come: a light blue volvo, driven by an elderly man with teased and tossled white hair. He drove at a slumbering speed which turtles would consider slow. But for some reason this scene seemed to intrigue me and out of a longing to end ...
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We atended a funderal that day, as friends, and upon leaving, we decided to go for a drive. That drive lasted 6 hrs. and 4 bathroom stops. During the first half hour, we spotted something that would become the center of many memories to come: a light blue volvo, driven by an elderly man with teased and tossled white hair. He drove at a slumbering speed which turtles would consider slow. We decided to follow him. We followed him down back streets and up main boulevards. After some time, our vi...
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My heels clicked on the pavement Red coat, black leggings, and sculpted hair Too many shots, I felt beautiful Arm tucked brazenly in yours, I wanted you Wanted you to talk, to tell me of you Coming home, I left them there The hopes of having you Like discarded maps in the streets of London.
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She's not happy. She can't be. She sits in the room and reads. That's miserable. She's my roomate, or what's left of her. We only talk before we go to bed, it's like an unspoken treaty. "How was your day?" "Fine." "Class?" "Ok." "Goodnight." "Night." Same thing everyday. It didn't used to be like this. ---------
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Overall I liked this piece. I didn't really care for the story but that regardless of that I thought it was well written. I like you sentence wording and choice of words. The only real proble was that, to me, the dialogue seemed forced and might not relate to a large audience.
Your use of dialogue is very good and doensn't seem forced, but I don't really know what the story is about. It is a little hard to follow. You could develope the characters more or add more narration to allow readers to be more involved and have a better understanding.
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