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AGE: 28
LOC: Lincoln, NE
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: April 14

“my spoon is too big. i am a banana.”

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Short Story / memoir in six
Version 1
1 Review   0 Comments
trauma, violence, silence, light. word scape{r}.
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Haiku/Senryu / somasphere
Version 3
20 Reviews   4 Comments
cool stream, ripple spheres circles in time radiate six senses heighten
Version 1
9 Reviews   1 Comment
a sad bit of lovely she sighs as the rain in her head falls out her windows. deep desire retires within her, retreating light, darkness an ever growing vice grip. she is alone. ragged breath a jagged reminder every few seconds, in, out. she wraps her span against the gentle tremble she feels throughout the coiled length of her body, vibrating just beneath the surface of her skin. the thoughts within her swirl and tilt, bend her gaze to the corner sill where the wet gets in and moves her. ther...
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Poetry / untitled ode
Version 1
9 Reviews   2 Comments
when i paint myself into a corner he paints me a picture an open invitation a free fall into life and love back again back again back again come a perfect compliment to my imperfections my jealous faults my stained satin intricacies he secures my nature makes me real and lovely once more a mirror reflection of my beauty my truth lies deep in his eyes my love's labors are lost in his eyes crystal blue and blackest flecks celestial celestite orbs bent towards bends my will as i do his follow hi...
Version 3
9 Reviews   6 Comments
she sighs as the rain in her head falls out her windows. deep desire retires within her, retreating light, darkness an ever growing vice grip. she is alone. ragged breath a jagged reminder every few seconds, in, out. she wraps her span against the gentle tremble she feels throughout the coiled length of her body, vibrating just beneath the surface of her skin. a reminder an end a beginning the thoughts within her swirl and tilt, bend her gaze to the corner sill where the wet gets in and moves...
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Poetry / Let me see
i am a poetess who loves rhymes and i think there are some very good rhymes here, however, the verses don't seem to flow into each other. each stanza makes a very good poem alone, but when they are pushed together they seem to read in a halting manner. i also like when the stanzas are of different lengths and rhyme schemes, but again they must change for a purpose and they must still flow into each other. the first stanza is in 3 and all the rest in 4. if you could make the 3 into 4 or change...
Lyrics / End of an Empire
i like this, it is a shame the melody can't be uploaded. this is a very concise way of putting the last 8 years (and then some) i like that you didn't go into the political specifics, thereby dating the piece. i wonder if you couldn't add a reprise or verse to reflect the hopes of present times under a new leader? a new way? a new order?
Poetry / Hyper-vented
as a lover of rhyme and meter i applaud you. the one thing i would have liked to see more of is the inter-play of rhymes. you employed this once that i can see which i put in quotes here: I’m giving back my living "loaned". I’ve "stoned" myself to point of death, which is the reason i wanted more. at least twice more to make it good and round. i love when the words trip over themselves to rhyme. one thing which confused me; the poem seems so personal and singular until the last two lines. i'v...
Haiku/Senryu / Immigrant
well, it isn't really a true haiku due to the subject matter and length, however i believe all poetry can choose to deny rigid form if it wants. so i won't review this based on that. this is nice, i do like stringing many verses in the 5-7-5 to make a poem. there is grief apparent, nice choice of words. the plight of the immigrant is well emoted, a fan of the double meaning in the word 'refuse', well thought out, well timed descriptions, never lingers too long or goes for the 'poor me' in ove...
Poetry / Titleless Draft
you have captured some lovely and sometimes sad images here. i do like the second draft more, there are a few more clue words in it to give this humble reader a better frame of reference. your first stanza is the most powerful. in the third stanza, are you speaking of ground rodents? i was a little unclear of that one. overall very well done
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