This brought a tear to my heart because all it takes are kind words to change a life and someone's outlook on life. this young boy sound like a beacon of light and I pray that everything worked out for you in the end. This was worth more than any critique we could give you.... and I'm very sure this story will inspire and possibly reach out to those who need it.

This was a nice short read. The ways we deal with death and all the things we go through emotionally... ahhhhhh... very very nice portrayal. Characters were fleshed out well... story made all the sense in the world and the ending was not fairytale.. its was real.... I don't normally read short stories but I read this one and enjoyed it much.

Spring...such wonders found within soil and new budding flowers... I could feel a great sense of need expressed through the selection of your words and could almost picture the events mentally. I like this.

this was a very beautiful way to describe the transition to heaven... without ever using the word... this was clever yet so though provoking. i could see this in a book...

I liked this much... just the direction in which it was going became unclear. I think it was a bit too cryptic for most.

this made me think of the day that you repent... or a meeting with Jesus... I'm not sure if I'm right about that but this took me to many different thoughts... all around it was a good read.

Liked it. It was a cool little song about how love can turn you into a junkie and you just hoping that he will make it...many will be able to relate to this.

This could have been better with a little more imagery involved other than that it warmed the heart and sound like it would be a good song when sung.