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AGE:
16
LOC: Nashville, TN
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: November 12
LOC: Nashville, TN
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: November 12
Hi I’m Layla, I’m new to this site. I hope you enjoy reading my writings and have advice and criticism for me. Thanks.
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Your whispers echoe in my ears, Your tears never crumble down your cheeks. Your love for me is beyond my greatest dreams. You're a surprise gift. My heart flutters like birds wings when I see your face. Your eyes stare straight through me with just enough grace to make me stare back. These feelings are new to me but it's as if I've had them forever. Every muscle in my body turns limp and relaxed. You make me smile for no reason at all. I'm proud to say I love you. The warmth of your body mak...
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I felt like the poem needed a little more detail about what you are talking about. Other than that I think it is a really cool poem.
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