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AGE: 23
LOC: United States
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: August 17

Hopefully what I post gives you insight to who I am. Hopefully not directly, however. But I’m not good at autobiographies and “About the Author”’s.

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In the blue and grey Picasso dirty yellow music played. By long emaciated fingers, frail and calloused, strings shimmered. Fingered strings in blue, in the mood of life ending, poor and sad, alone ten fingers played somber tones by the heart of an old, bearded man. And his head bowed for his notes, for his sadness - for a pence. A loaf of bread would get him by; for water he drank rain that poured on him nightly near the somber blue-grey ocean port. To live among him was to learn of him; to w...
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As she nears another night and I watch spread the yellow light of dawn in the sun's rise, I helplessly recognize the relentless beckoning and banshee shreiking of Creativity's call: "Bring thee to the page! Script on scroll. Paint the canvas in strolling strides. Straddle reality, it's a horse to ride. Dance with struggle and flirt with the tide."
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As she nears another night and I watch spread the yellow light of dawn at the sun's rise I helplessly recognize the hopeless artistry and hap-hazard lucidity of hearing Creativity's call: "Bring thee to the page! Script on scroll. Paint the canvas in strolling strides. Straddle reality, it's a horse to ride. Dance with struggle. Flirt with the tide."
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"Part One" Shannon dreamed, created, inspired, then died. "The Sequel" Her pass proved death draws fame. "Headstone" 'I died before I loved you.'
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"Part One" Shannon dreamed, created, inspired, then died. "The Sequel" Her death proved woes draw fame. "part The Third" 'I died before I loved you.'
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This is great. The fact that the original price was less than 15 for a soul makes me laugh. Good humor. "on Sale" is better than if you said "for Sale" so keep that.
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The wording of the first sentence after the list seems like can be improved. I know what you mean, but it sounds like these items would go in her trash. It's quickly clarified in the second half of the sentence, but is there a better way to word it? Any other lack of clarity came from my own limited vocabulary. This is truly great. I was most disappointed when I got to "pe" and there was nothing more. I look forward to reading further as it comes!
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