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AGE: 30
LOC: Honolulu, HI
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Poetry / Man in the Attic
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1 Review   2 Comments
The man that lives in the attic is soot-coated ebony licorice. serpentine tongue with whip-like wit. His smile, as crooked and bony is his back. Let not his feeble appearance fool you. Surprisingly spry and attentive is he and he seldom rests. Not a wink while there’s dark. Like a bat in your cave, slinging his guano around. Hidden in the corner, now covered in webs and dust, a trunk is found. One lock. One key. My turn, deep breath… and then light. Just light and awe. And I reme...
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Romance / Grim Love Song
Version 1
5 Reviews   1 Comment
-Grim Love Song- we marry when the time is right, if that's something your interested in, maybe make a child. New possibilities. The fear, not new, nibbling away at me trying to replace this joyful knowing. It's telling me, 'You were wrong before about this stuff. what is different? Other than the interconnectedness of our stories...We came to the same idea at the same time in the most perfect time of our lives... That moment when we expected it least. And I think you just might feel the same...
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Poetry / Man in the Attic
Version 1
2 Reviews   0 Comments
The man that lives in the attic is soot-coated ebony licorice. serpentine tongue with whip-like wit. His smile, as crooked and bony is his back. Let not his feeble appearance fool you. Surprisingly spry and attentive is he and he seldom rests. Not a wink while there's dark. Like a bat in your cave, slinging his guano around. Hidden in the corner, now covered in webs and dust, a trunk is found. One lock. One key. My turn, deep breath... and then light. Just light and awe. And I remembered the ...
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Poetry / Better This way
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It feels better this way. I certainly feel better today. We let go of something inside. Suddenly, didn't the world come alive? You can look into eyes with purpose and poise; see what's beneath all the tears and the noise. I can still smell you in my hair, on my skin, everywhere you and images spin. I'm not afraid of what might be, what is, is not or what could happen, you see. I'm not too worried about what you will think, for if we are linked, there will be no kink. I can't wonder anymore wi...
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Poetry / Sullen
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Sometimes sadness seeks you out like a dirty minion doing the biddings of his evil master prodding and poking his way into your happiness only to suck out the last wisp of breath extiguishing the golding flame of joy that burned once before leaving in trade a damp and silten shallow grave slowly, slowly filling with tears and fallen earth And when that bastard enters your house and burns down your joy you are to rise up and flick a spark once again slowly blowing life back into the earth for ...
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Haiku/Senryu / Pinch
I think this describes being pinched or the idea of pinching someone really well. I question the use of the ":" In this case I guess u are using it for summation. I like the choice of words. Its possible you could find a more colorful word in place of comes that would really speak to your point.
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Poetry / Doodling
had to pull out the dictionary for this one ;) What I took away from this is that the character in the story is searching through their mind for words to paint the picturs indwelling. The marrage of fine art concepts with the written is captivating. Perhaps the character sees what needs to be on the paper and through editing finds that nothing need be said in the end. that the journey took place in the mind without the need for words at all. perhaps that is what is meant by "I write the paper...
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Locked
the imagery in this is almost tactile. So vividly you painted with words. My favorite lines are "The emptiness on the other side is complimented by the scenery." and "A cold and quiet evening breeze fosters silence with a loud intensity, and the definition of this perception makes one question its authenticity." This piece is riddled with irony, cleverly written and enjoyable to read.
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