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AGE:
21
LOC: United Kingdom
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: June 13
LOC: United Kingdom
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: June 13
Hi my name is Rob I’m nineteen from Liverpool.I’ve only just started writing poetry so I’m still Learning.
My Myspace page is www.myspace.com/robgoughofficial
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I'm losing faith In this place, Once it was real Now it's fake. The world is made of glass Easily broken, For every scarred word a crack opens, Every angry fist Awakes my fears, If we don't change The world won't last years. I'm worried, What's coming next, This world has me perplexed.
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Pete walk down streets Of quicksand, Slowly sinking, Fighting hard But sinking. Killing tears Fill his eyes Like acid rain. His face worn Turning pale, Trying to excel Only to fail. Got to fight Got to fight, May feel wrong But it's right. Pete can't lose To his fears, If he does He'll disappear. Leaving family, Leaving friends, Leaving life.
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I'm losing faith In this place, Once it was real Now it's fake. The world is made of glass Easily broken, For every scarred word a crack opens, Every angry fist Awakes my fears, If we don't change The world won't last years. I'm worried, What's coming next, This worlds has me perplexed.
Version 1
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Broken Laughter Fills the room, Like smoke From a chimney breast. Funny tears Fall from my eyes, Like water Down a waterfall. Hidden anger Leaps from the page Like lightning above. Hurtful fun Makes me bleed, Like a knife to the chest.
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People stare At a three legged world, As it walks past The dreams of millions. People stare At a sighing universe, Slowly fading. People stare At freedom walking. People stare At distant memories. As they wonder What's next. People stare At words dripping From the mouths Of dogs. Insanity ?
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I like this.I don't think it needs any work.You have a good way with words. All The Best Rob
I like this.I like the words you've used.It gets my imagination flowing.To be honest for me I don't think you need any advice on this because I think it's great already.Good Job All The Best Rob
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I like this.In my opinion I think it has a good flow.I love your use of words.Really well done.I don't think it needs anything doing to it. All The Best Rob
This is a really good poem.It has a good flow.The words you use are very good.Puts the point across well.Good Job. All The Best Rob
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