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The wind picked up and carried fall leaves across the Mackenzie West High School parking lot. The wind had been bringing chilled air lately and had put the people of Weadley in a bitter mood. That, and the fact that there has been frequent unexplained disappearances in the town. Heidi zipped up her jacket in an attempt to keep out the chilly wind. She was leaning on her truck waiting for her brother Jason to get out of detention for roughing up one of his classmates at lunc...
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Very absurd humor. Sort of like a rushed British cartoon. Storyline absurd and quick as well but thats what kept me interested, wondering what absurd thing would happen next. Many ironic areas like the shark being referred by Adrian Hawthorne after Bronson lost his sharks. Also pulled the emotion factor by adding a cute expressive monkey. Well written, well thought out, a little disorganized and absurd but all in all good story.
Very dry humour. Clear and very descriptive without having too much. Reminds me of the movie Fight Club. I could more see this as being a movie rather than a book just for the fact that I'm not too sure as to how the reader would understand the setting of this story if they havent seen Fight Club because if I hadnt seen that movie I dont think I would understand the extraordinary ordinary dry dark humour and it would be harder to follow. Other than that it was very well written, seems as thou...
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