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AGE: 31
LOC: Texarkana, TX
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: March 30

My name is Billy and I live in Texas.  I mostly like to write short stories and poetry, though it’s always been a long-term goal of mine to write a novel someday.  Time always seems to get in the way and keep me from finishing it, but who knows?  Maybe someday.  Anyway, the poetry I like best is rather classical in form, but not quite.  I don’t usually write sonnets or other historical forms like that, but I’m very demanding that once I do select a particular meter and rhyme scheme, that I stick with it consistently.  I’ve studied French, Anglo-Saxon, and Hebrew forms of verse, and there are aspects I like about all of them.  You might find influences from any of those types in my poetry.  My short stories are usually high fantasy, by wh…

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Short Story / Indifference
The story was interesting and I think you write well, but I do have a few comments to make. For one thing, although I understood and could accept (on an intellectual level) that the main character felt the way she did, I never quite understood why she felt that way. There didn't seem to be anything very bad going on in her life, except that her husband was neglectful and paid her little mind. I'm not sure. . . it just seems that indifference on the part of a lover is a silly reason to sink th...
This was entertaining. I liked the discussion with the crocodile- you did a very good job with the dialogue there. This is the sort of story a child of about 8 or 9 years would like (I'm a teacher, so I know a little bit about such things). Be careful not to make it too long, though. That age group doesn't have a lengthy attention span. I'm not saying it's too long now, or even anywhere near it. . . it's just a point to keep in mind as you continue. Longer books for them have to be divided up...
Sci Fi & Fantasy / Like Father Like Son
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Poetry / My Love
I enjoyed the poem very much, partly for the smooth flowing language and partly because of the unusual way of saying things. But mostly, I suspect, because I know exactly how the speaker feels. Been there myself, for quite a few years now, and I imagine there are quite a few others who have felt this way too. Beautiful lyric; keep up the good work.
Sci Fi & Fantasy / Delusion
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