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AGE: 36
LOC: North Judson, IN
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: October 18

For each day in my life I experience thoughts that I want to remember with words or photos. The writings I produce are my thoughts put into words. Just a piece of me!

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Poetry / Turn Back Around
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Turn Back Around   You know that I am always here Comfort from an open ear Outcasting all internal fear Speak out loud, say it clear Hurtful words just disappear   Turn back around and look in my eyes A true friend I cannot hide Never a doubt nor ever denied More of a friend always replied All yet seeming only contrived   If only you could see The things you mean to me So much difference one can make Only to make a demeaning mistake Life is to short for goodness sake   Tu...
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Poetry / One Small Glance
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The first light Eyes wide open Feelings of fright All is known only of night Darkened zone of invisible flight   Breathing deep Searching serene sleep Dreaming the constant thought Away from the past To awaken to what would never last   Each second pondering short lived memories Opening eyes and experiencing all the possibilties Although unknowingly promised instabilty Piercing bright light gleaming everywhere Eyes squinting from its harsh glare   The birth of a newborn A sight...
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Poetry / Turn Back Around
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You know that I am always here Comfort from an open ear Outcasting all internal fear Speak out loud, say it clear Hurtful words just disappear Turn back around and look in my eyes A true friend I cannot hide Never a doubt nor ever denied More of a friend always replied All yet seeming only contrived If only you could see The things you mean to me So much difference one can make Only to make a demeaning mistake Life is to short for goodness sake Turn back around and let me know If this is the ...
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Journal, Diary, & Blogging / Only In Time
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Pain can be such dribble. As love may be a powerful storm. Betrayal is the fall out shelter Both worlds only rely upon. Constant battles between The door which opens and closes. Countless dreams and memories Embellished only when we sleep. Endless accounts from nightmares announce Open wounds shall in time heal.
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Poetry / Reality
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Reality exists without illusion Although life is so confusing Bleeding hearts and souls refusing To rise above the mystical delusion Underlying hopes and longing for a dream A boundary that emits an inevitable scream Reality portrays a belief in us all A solid step without a fall Knowledge is courage Looking for strength Escape the tragic actions of reality Embrace constant practicality Venture along insisting equality
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Poetry / Our Souls Mated
I only had a hard time understanding the comparison of the birds in the 2nd statement. The part of you looking at dirty laundry was not really something I understand that fits in your poem. The completed poem as a whole was definitely a good read. Thanks for posting:)
Poetry / Night
The dark shadow that seemed to have a light within itself ... went from wild to feel more a pleasing presence. Needs better flow. I am wondering if it is a lost love or a stranger that was seen at one point that was etched in the mind. Really didnt understand the metaphoric usage. Was it that the night was a man? Or the man was the night? Might just be my loss to a good reading due to my misunderstanding of what it means as a whole.
Children's / The Parmesan Beast
I think that when you spoke of hitting the floor maybe it should say the ground since you are outside. In reference to the beast being a Parmesan beast why does he ask for bread instead of the cheese? I was interested in knowing how he knew where the man was if he can only see behind him? ("I jumped out of the way as it ran at me") I did truly enjoy it though.
Poetry / ABCs of Poesy
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Poetry / Dark Hide
lol Are ya hidin from the cops? Would like to hear more about why you were running ....may give it more power and lengthen it for a clearer finish. The title concludes that they didnt get away(or you). Inevitably feeling the stresses of peer pressured situation.
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