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AGE: 21
LOC: Baltimore, MD
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: June 26

I’ve been writing since i was eight years old, so its been twelve years. I know i have the thoughts its just the issue of getting them to sound perfect to me. I don’t think i’ve ever written anything that I’ve fallen in love with until recently. I guess I’ve finally found my muse. As they say a writer is his/her own worst critic. I happen to agree I guess I’ll learn to appreciate it more eventually, at least i hope so.

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Novel Treatments / the relationship from hell
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I can feel her icey blue eyes piercing into the back of my head, as if I yet again have messed up in some deleriously horrendous way. I slowly turn toward her and raise my eyes to meet hers. The beautiful blue eyes she once had have turned to a grayish harsh tone. I ask a bit hesitantly,"Whats wrong?" "Like you don't know? Wait of course you're gonna try to play the innocence card aren't ya? You think I'm an idiot, don't you? Seriously if you are going to cheat at least have some tact!" "Chea...
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Poetry / The First
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The endless heartbreak The streams of tears The countless memories Through all the years The first kiss That you stole so sweetly The first touch That you made discreetly The first I love you That you said so caring The first arguement Because you got to daring The first apology You made so sincere The first promise You would always be here Which seems to be The first lie Because where are you And where am I?
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I have met a many people And in my younger days I would swear I knew what love was Until you came my way From the first second i saw you I instantly knew you were it That god has brought us together And that cupids arrow had hit You are my forever And forever you will be For I no that we will never Have dishonesty We have shared some already And theres so much more to know So baby if your willing Here is what i propose That you and i grow old Hand in hand and heart in heart that no matter wha...
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You say that you are unhappy Yet you change nothing at all You claim that you love her Yet every fight who do you call You say we are just friends Yet whos lips are yours pressed upon You say you dont want to hurt her Then maybe its time to move on I love you with all of my heart And you know I will always be here But I cannot share you The time to choose is near You will have to decide If she is worth me For I no longer can bear The dishonesty Choose not out of lust nor fear Choose from your...
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Haiku/Senryu / embarassed
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argueing loudly drawing a very large crowd blushing with red cheeks
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i like the way that you worded it. it shows thought instead of just sitting and throwing anything that pops in your head out. i think my favorite line is the one that says "Me lost in the laser of her eye light" all i can say is well done
Poetry / The Door
ok this is a piece that shows that you have talent but im not sure if i know what you mean by this piece the only emotion i felt was confusion i like the last couple lines they had me thinking but it was about christ is that what this is about because its hard to tell
Poetry / Lunatic
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