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AGE:
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LOC: Darien, IL
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: October 11
LOC: Darien, IL
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: October 11
I am Rebecca. I am a transcendentalist, I am an objectivist, I am a liberal, I am a vegetarian. I am learning that it’s okay to be all of these things at the same time. And I am learning to be proud of the people that I am. I like being in love, and also wearing hats. I appreciate it when people read my poetry, but I am learning not to care whether they like it or not. My favourite books are Walden and The Fountainhead. I hate no people, I love many people. I am learning to care about the people I dislike. I am not learning what the meaning of life is, but I am learning that it’s okay not to know some things. Quite frequently I laugh so I hard I fall down. I am learning that it’s worth it.
I hope that you are having a good day.
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Gravity So now we find ourselves together, alone. The glow from your face is casting an irrational rosy hue upon the carpet, which is old, and dirty, and seemed so tacky just a few minutes ago before you started looking at me with your eyes all full of silver sighs and there is a split second when I am noticing that your lips are soft and also very close to mine, when I will start to think that maybe someday I could love you that maybe there is something in you that could fill more than just ...
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Worms, raw, quivering; we were always meant to die in the morning sun.
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This world get so dark, but when sun turns its back on me it's you I see. While we're together we'll watch sunsets and pretend they're sunrises we'll watch the flowers bloom and pretend there's no frost coming soon. Honey, honey let's fall in love let's dress up this vulture in the clothes of a dove. and jump off the highest cliff we can find in the middle of the wide, rolling plain. Darlin, darlin, you're gonna leave me bleeding from the stumps where my wings you used to be and I'll do all t...
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It's late but I'm not going to sleep the streetlights outshine the moon they illuminate the fog on the street as the cars with tires turn snow into smoke. and the cold, lonely wind whispers love songs to the trees singing bend into me bend into me bend into me Our tears leave their stains on our pillows and sheets As I droop into bad caricature of one of the girls that I used to to be that I used to be. and the cold, lonely wind whispers love songs to the trees singing bend into me bend into ...
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I get so lost sometimes I don't know which way is up I don't know which way is down And I feel so alone But I know you're loving me And I have come to find that you are like the sun as it warms the branches of the trees. But, baby, maybe we all need a little shit in our lives to keep us from giving way Maybe we all need to die a little sometimes to keep us living for today. I would fall a thousand miles if I could lift you up, I would cry a hundred lakes if I could dry your tears, and I would...
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Overall, I think you've done a good job with this. It's lighthearted and funny and very entertaining and I could imagine it having a jaunty sort of rhythm to it that would be fun to listen to. However there were a few lines are kind of awkward. For example, line three, "nice good hum." Saying its both nice and good is kind of redundant. Plus, you already used the word good to describe the sex and it's a little uncreative. The line about bubblegum is a good one, so obviously you have to have s...
I thought a lot of these jokes were funny, I think with proper delivery they could be hilarious. I liked the line about being casually nuts, and also the one about the ex-husband. The thing is, it seems like a rather disjointed piece to me. I'm sure the way you added so many page breaks might have contributed to this, but still I feel like you focus so much on the individual jokes that it doesn't have a cohesive flow. Also, your mental illness jokes are funny but you might want to broaden you...
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