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AGE:
27
LOC: Miami, FL
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: September 14
LOC: Miami, FL
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: September 14
as the world spins down the (literal) metaphorical toilet….
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Each soapbubble popped into a note...
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Damn it, I wouldn't have bought her those five inch heels if I'd known she was going to stab me in the heart with it... it was expensive.
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I kept you under my perfectly formulated facade, too bad your too dumb to realize I loved you. Either way I'd rather keep loving you than have someone love me back, and step on my heart with another cowboy boot.
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HE: Jane, I'm really in the mood for some coffee. SHE: Listen John, coffee it's no good for ya'. It's like a stimulant man, a drug, didn't they teach you anything in middle school with the drug/sex talk. HE: I think i was absent that day... SHE: That would explain alot. No wonder you didnt know that a guy... HE: JANE PLEASE! I'm runnin' off your sarcasm here! SHE: Good, it's stronger than any coffee you'll ever drink. HE: Please, we're already walkin towards the... JANE!!! Come back here! SHE...
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Treehugger are air hoggers blame others...
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WOW. this piece is absolutely amazing. I LOVE your personifications, the description of the woman was seductive. your style of writing is amazing, when i read it it feels like something from another life, ya know. I really enjoyed this, please continue with your writing, I GIVE IT A 10!
absolutely right my friend. very well stated. though i odnt understnd why you put it under non-fiction when it is so clearly the truth.
very cute! i dont know if cute was what u are goin for but it's cute, also it si freakin hilarious. keep up the good work kid!
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