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AGE: 51
LOC: Madras, OR
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: August 14

I used to write quite often. My oldest daughter introduced me to this site and it has sparked my interest to once again write things down that come to me. I usually get a thought and put it all down at once. The feedback I get is interesting and I like to review also.

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Poetry / Dancing on glass
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I felt your faintest touch on my arm It has come to that again. As my tears threaten to spill over The tremble and rage gather. Leave and never return I whisper. These words carry little weight for I don't believe them myself. Crashing through my floor of glass You've been waltzing through my past, tempting me with every twirl. Ah what a wicked girl. The leaves and dust at my door Have left a trace of you no more.
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Poetry / Moon thoughts
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Strawberry moon hugging the horizon I have waited, come join me. Illuminate me, bring me pleasure. Feels like rain wet lips, delicious. I can almost hear a humming in my head. Your light reaches into my dreams, So happy you're here, stay, stay longer. You've stretched across my universe. Etching desire on the heavens. Ah, strawberry moon, don't leave.
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Poetry / silent and sorry
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Sorry, Sorry, Sorry I am screaming in my head For all the mistakes, and being misled Sorry, Sorry, Sorry For all the pain I've caused Lost promises, failures, and flaws Please know I've loved you and would go through it all again to hold you as a babe in my arms warm and safe. Sorry, Sorry, Sorry For the screaming in your head When you wish for the silence that only comes with death.
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Short Story / Murder (in two parts)
I liked the rythym of your writing. I noticed twice you used the word "furry" and I believe you wanted "fury". Once 'nor furry could move him' and 'her furry was palpable'. I could be wrong but fury makes more sense. Good story and I like the the irony at the end.
Poetry / Reckless Motive
I like the way it leaps along, it feels like you had an urgency to put pen to paper as if you were about to lose something. I enjoyed it
Sounds like regret, despair, and some hope. Seperation is one of the hardest things we humans do. I liked your poem overall.
Poetry / Further Ablaze
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