avkoshy's profile
AGE:
44
LOC: India
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: November 14
LOC: India
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: November 14
self-proclaimed disciple of jesus, human being, male, family man, poet,writer,critic, teacher of english language and literature and creative writing, interests include writing besides almost everything else, living in bangalore at present, and yeah, the picture of the tiger happened randomly so letting it stay as in andre breton’s kind of automatic writing
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i can't unlock my own reviews 'cos i need them credits to and everytime i write a few words they begin it they seem to revel in it they took away my write to speak they took away my need to visit tho' i c quite a few like mine i got too many of my reviews fined what's your loss if i'm not a good critic? what's the game if i can't read my comments? i just wanted to write poems on urbis and alsop but it's not enough this ain't tupac rap , its more like simple...
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“This does not qualify.” “Your credits have not been taken away.” “Your credits have been taken away.” I see that everywhere One has the chance to be humbled and educated. Personally, I welcome all reviews. Being nobody. Even one that only says “done” That I can make neither head nor tail of The first part of which seems to have come Somewhere else in a comment. But I see that all are not so catholic In their taste or views. Poets are not always critics And do know how to appreciate. I never ...
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“This does not qualify.” “Your credits have not been taken away.” “Your credits have been taken away.” I see that everywhere One has the chance to be humbled and educated. Personally, I welcome all reviews. Being nobody. Even one that only says “done” That I can make neither head nor tail of The first part of which seems to have come Somewhere else in a comment. But I see that all are not so catholic In their taste or views. Poets are not always critics And do know how to appreciate. I never ...
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she sits elsewhere submit-saves these poems almost a poem a minute -"a stranger to my eyes?"- appears as if by a spell i read to write reviews good and bad earn a few urbis credits unlock my reviews but become spellbound "nothing to change" i'm forced to type nothing to say they are just once too often word perfect reworked many times? great? mediocre? i really don't know i'm just a poet though once i was more and what the hell is this? you’re only nineteen. f from someplace i don’t think i k...
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“This does not qualify.” “Your credits have not been taken away.” “Your credits have been taken away.” I see that everywhere One has the chance to be humbled and educated. Personally, I welcome all reviews. Being nobody. Even one that only says “done” That I can make neither head nor tail of The first part of which seems to have come Somewhere else in a comment. But I see that all are not so catholic In their taste or views. Poets are not always critics And do know how to appreciate. I never ...
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you have a very terse style i would like to see you expand i know exactly what's happening because same thing happens to me when i write -everything becomes all too brief oh yeah also editing for instance in the first sentence if they were moaning or grumbling and he can't make it out it means it's very faint so no need to write very faint hard to tell is enough the man with the water colours i wish you'd expand on that a lot more so it goes cheers
well it's ok but i seem to have red lots of poem like this one it's poetic but i onlyl like the last three lines which are pretty prosaic
i like the twist from one life to another and the ending but i feel something is left unresolved because you don't come back to the beginning theme
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