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AGE: 29
LOC: United States
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: September 17

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Journal, Diary, & Blogging / Digging
Version 4
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She sat staring at herself in the mirror. A reflection of herself posed a picture on canvas, a two-dimensional spectacle with a waterfall of emotion splayed behind metal and silver.  She thought to herself of the things that she wished she had done, instead of doing nothing at all. Her hopes, her dreams were to create a masterpiece, something that would or could possibly create an influence or maybe even leave fingerprints on the heart of another individual, another soul. She tried ...
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Short Story / Digging
Version 3
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She sat staring at herself in the mirror. A reflection of herself posed a picture on canvas, a two-dimensional spectacle with a waterfall of emotion splayed behind metal and silver.  She thought to herself of the things that she wished she had done, instead of doing nothing at all. Her hopes, her dreams were to create a masterpiece, something that would or could possibly create an influence or maybe even leave fingerprints on the heart of another individual, another soul. She tried ...
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Short Story / Digging
Version 2
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She sat staring at herself in the mirror. A reflection of her posed a picture on canvas, a two-dimensional spectacle with a waterfall of emotion splayed behind metal and silver.  She thought to herself of the things that she wished she had done, instead of doing nothing at all. Her hopes, her dreams were to create a masterpiece, something that would or could possibly create an influence or maybe even leave fingerprints on the heart of another individual, another soul. She tried for ...
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Journal, Diary, & Blogging / Digging
Version 1
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She sat staring at herself in the mirror. A reflection of her posed a picture on canvas, a 2 dimensional spectacle with a waterfall of emotion splayed behind metal and silver. And she thought to herself of the things that she wished she had done, instead of doing nothing at all. Her hopes, her dreams were to create a masterpiece, something that would or could possibly create an influence or maybe even fingerprints on the heart of another individual, another soul. She tried for years, but coul...
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Poetry / She...
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Mind splits into many pieces that crumble to the floor like a crumbling cracker My bodies’ ability to stay together has lost its motive The glue has dried and cracked forming an ancient ruin of priceless value left in a discount store collecting dust My blanket has been stripped away from me, leaving my naked and cold body to shiver Its piercing fingers enter into my pores striking my nerves with many hammers and nails from its infinite bag of accessories Needles and thread I use to tr...
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Journal, Diary, & Blogging / unfolding
Very well written. Thanks for sharing...it was enlighting.
Humor/Satire / The Write Effect
THat was pretty funny. Especially the very end, "Sincerely, I Will Always Be Better Than You."
Journal, Diary, & Blogging / Quarter Life Crisis
Good journal entry. It's great being able to let it out. I don't know how you are to critique the journal, diary & blogging writings, because to me...its you trying to expell the emotions or feelings that are inside...whether it be a canvas splattered with paint that makes no sense at all, or a cluster of words on a page. It made sense to me, which makes me believe that others get it as well. WHy do we write? We write with the aim to hopefully touch others around us, that may stumble upon our...
Journal, Diary, & Blogging / My life
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Journal, Diary, & Blogging / In a way that I hope to keep from change
I know what it is like to try and dig up your voice again. Monotony does do alot of damage it seems...if monotony/routines take over ones life. My passions have decipitated throughout the years...and it seems that everytime i try to pick it up, i cant seem to get back on the track completely...but i dont give up...and that is the important thing. So don't give up...and Good Luck on finding your voice again...Keep your spirits high! Good write.
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Journal, Diary, & Blogging / you wake up...
Journal, Diary, & Blogging / a moment to think about nothing.
Journal, Diary, & Blogging / A Few Thoughts

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