This piece reads and sounds more like a poem than a romance piece. You could turn this into a romance piece but, you need to add a storyline, characters, details and correct spelling and punctuation. The title needs to be worked as well. Not bad, but needs some work.

The title, A wish for you, doesn't fit this piece. I don't see in this story anyone wishing for anything. I couldn't follow this piece or understand the storyline at all. You need more details, tell the readers who the characters are and what role they play.

The title caught my eye right away. This is a powerful piece of writing. There are so many great detailed lines in this piece its hard to pick one so I will say this piece should be published. You have courag to write about something happening to many families and children world wide. kudos

The title is catchy. This reads more like a poem than a horror story. You need to put this in a poem structure. add more detials, descriptions and settings for this piece and your characters. This needs to be worked on and have a better understanding that readers will look at, understand and wanna read.

Not bad, add some specific details and punctuation. This is true for many. add to this and make it funnier.

I am a little confused with this play? Who are the charactes exaclty? Who are they waiting for and to kill him or her for what? GIve details of the settings and your characters. What does Valin and edourdo look like? THis piece is ok but has no storyline. It is hard to follow.

This is a very well written piece. You have the potential to expand this into a bigger story or manybe even a book at a later date.

This is a nice poem. Add more descriptive words and more details and it will be even better.

This limerick i agree with 100%. I have received some nasty reviews from ppl and i have had my reviews overturned but they have not this is why i am leaving this bs site.

This is a great start for a song. You need to add a chorus and not just verses. Do not repeat this line in every verse Sweet Son of Mine,