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LOC: Hooksett, NH
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: November 05
LOC: Hooksett, NH
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: November 05
Hello. I am twenty-six years old and have written poetry and short fictional stories since the precocious age of eleven. My writing matures with me, and I am always creating stories from dreams, nightmares, diary entries, conversations, and random scenarios that enter my mind whenever I am sitting, standing, walking, talking, remaining silent, and eating. I was always a unique and creative person. My writing refreshes my state of mind and has always opened my eyes to the changing world in which I live. I enjoy reading as well, which contributes to my creative process. I enjoy reading original coming-of-age stories, dramas, thrillers, legal thrillers by John Grishman, and quality work that invokes mystery, suspense, and action. Som…
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Prologue Lydia Spencer glanced down at her large, rounded belly and sighed. "What's wrong?" her best friend, Mischelle Warren asked, concerned. Lydia faced her friend, moving slowly and as carefully as possible on the bed. "I was ...
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"Let's go!" Camylle Walters demanded, her voice urgent and frightened. Her hazel eyes were intent on her friend, who was three years younger than her. Noreen Hayes was fifteen, but her timid nature and baby face made her seem similar to a child. Noreen grabbed her duffel bag and struggled to place the strap across her shoulder with her shaky hands. "I'll take it", Camylle declared, grabbing the bag from her and slinging it over her shoulder.&n...
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Her eyes glanced in the rear view mirror for the twentieth time. Amelia was always paranoid, something her friends constantly reminder her about. "I don't know what's real anymore", she said aloud in a whisper. There was a cherry red car directly behind her in the right lane. She could not see the driver's face; it was dark outside and the shadows of the night sky were cast over the city. Her right hand gripped the wheel tighter, the hard object di...
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The opening line is very intriguing and enigmatic. The first few paragraphs allow the reader to travel inside the protagonist's mind. The description of the vulnerability that the protagonist feels when imagining herself as naked and shivering is very well-written. Including descriptions of her family's hardships and the despair that she feels as a direct result provide background of the protagonist and the reasons for her current thoughts. The reader soon gets the feeling that the train is m...
The description and imagery that was created in this story captivated my attention from the opening scene to the end of the story. The imagery was especially powerful when the protagonist's thoughts and seriousness of his injuries were described. The tone matched the theme and suspense in the story from beginning to end. Each page was worth reading and the theme was very interesting. It would be better if the reader understood how and why the protagonist was injured. Is he on the run and his ...
This story definitely contains concepts of science fiction. Sara has an intersting power, and I wanted to learn more about her. What is Alex's connection to Sara? Both of these characters share a familiarity that was not explained in the story. Is Sara a runaway who Alex was originally hired to murder? The theme, along with elements of science fiction remained consistent and the tone was consistent as well. You also have a well-written and explored concept of the common theme, good versus evi...
The dialogue is very captivating. It provides an understanding, although a limited understanding here, of the plot and storyline. The theme is a very interesting one, and a difficult to write about and explore with sensitivity. The theme is a complex one, a young woman whose parents died unexpectedly and left all of their money to her wealthy aunt. The female protagonist's difficult speaking in her dialogue shows that she continues to experience difficulty discussing that situation and her pr...
This is a very interesting character study. I was excited to know more about the protagonist and the kind of business in which he's employed. The tone did not change throughout this story and was easy to follow, as well as very consistent. The protagonist contributes to the consistency of the theme. The protagonist also seems to be a very enigmatic individual. The theme was also carefully and very well-written and did not contain any points of confusion. This story does not seem to follow a c...
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