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AGE: 54
LOC: Wheat Ridge, CO
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: December 31

April O’Brien, writer and artist. thanks for the reviews!

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Short Story / "Media Wars"
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14 Reviews   1 Comment
Ayden Purcell took a long, loving look at the beautiful woman that lay in his bed. He quietly finished dressing, found his watch and put it on. The entire time he wandered the room accessorizing for the day, he kept thinking about her. She was sleeping the sleep of the innocent, deep and satisfying. How long had it been since he had known that kind of sleep? Not that long, had he really changed this much in such a short time? He, the guy that had started out with all of the right intentions,...
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10 Reviews   0 Comments
Kevin oh Kevin, look what we’ve lost, more than all words can explain. How do we survive it? How do we go on? Can mere mortals survive this much pain? If we had the power to know what would come, would we do it all over again? The answer is simple; of course we would dear, great losses are lessons, without them we’ve nothing to gain. If we hadn’t known her, been part of her life, the emptiness would still be the same. Kissing her cheek and watching her smile gave us so many wonderful years. R...
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Poetry / Katrina my love
Version 1
13 Reviews   2 Comments
Katrina my love First thing every morning my mind flows to you. Then reality hits me, your time here is through. No changing the weather, no mountain to move. What reason for living, if I'm not living for you? The mail came today, a letter for you. I wanted to run up the street yelling! “She was here! See, it’s true” Your pictures tell stories, that I wish people knew. I just can’t accept that your time here is through. One day I pretended, you were asleep in your bed. I screamed out your na...
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Short Story / My Breath--
I couldnt get into this piece, but the writing skills were good.
Short Story / Wildness
I felt the moment he fell in love with the gun. Very good description of civilized man verses uncivilized man. Good writing style.
Short Story / Pyramid of Hate
good description. Is this another view of the piece I just read? From another victim in the pile?
Non-fiction / Um About Me
Well, I dont want you to hold a grudge against me, especially if you have a bunch of knives and guns. So good job! Its perfect, and all that. Good luck on the seven year thing.
Short Story / 'The Omega Tree'..
I shouldnt critique anything I know nothing about. I guess its good. Dark. Sad.
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