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Wow. That's pretty scary and slightly cruel. I guess there should be no higher compliment than saying to a writer, "Your words made me (fill in the blank)!" well...your words made me pretty sick. In a good way of course! There is definatlty points for the rawness of screaming You got Herpes! You got herpes! You got herpes! You got…...an STD… in someones face. You said it's a slow song, but I can't hear it, so in my head it was screams. Twisted.

It sounds as if you loved to hate this woman, and perhaps had a long affair/marriage with her. (perhaps a short affair?) She tempted you but not you alone and you fought the urge to give in. I could be extremely wrong (probably am) but this is how I see your words. As if she was a neighbor or ex wife whom had been in your life and you couldn't help but watch or be a part of it. For the most part I enjoyed. There was vivid desciption of a woman desperatly clinging to her youth, and a man in di...