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AGE: 31
LOC: Oklahoma City, OK
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: January 23

im a poet. i love words..i am possessed obsessed consumed by words..how else can i explain it..every inch of my being as well as my psyche are shaken by the power of words..in the beauty, the ugliness, the audacity..

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You tell me you're coming home 2 am The ripple of those words send me Flushed red cheeks warm with the Message that filters through me I am home Warm Unapologetic Craving Home The last time you and I spoke I got lost in my thoughts And the glassy-eyed boy that you've become With all this mystery hidden behind flesh Walls Innocent hands never gripped the steering wheel of your Imagination More than twice And I hold your heart softly next to mine Offering comfort to the weakness you blame On be...
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He swoons in acoustic Circles Melodic to the ticking in my Heart Arms holding tightly to the beat in His smiling eyes Warm enough though the summer is over And I don't mind when he calls my name In the middle of the night Slumber suited for his song And I drink him down lips to tongue To body Where do I begin Where does he This end He reaches out to me They're playing our waltz All eyes on us Time stopped And I love this man Dreamt of o'er and o'er Just like im falling And he never lets go Th...
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Poetry / star fu**er
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I balance upon my own emotion Wading reckless beneath just waves Goldenrod pressed delicately at each of my Temples Awaiting the presence of gods Proud ambrosia lined lips and lungs Of gods They all whispered in free verse Each a lyric upon steady arms And lungs Each tempting me to the edge of my own Creation And I lay sanity blissfully among the tides Only to have it washed away with any May day message scrolled playfully into the Sand And salt Of tears I wept to hold you tighter to this wor...
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The trouble is brewing in the north Smiles cryptic with resonance of Past lullaby scripture I hold her close to the soles of my shoes When she deserves less attention Than the gum sleeping there I am not an excuse for this behaviour Good enough to get you through like a drug Sedating you into a moment of pure Ecstasy You think the earth at your footsteps feels less Than the mourning sky When it rains Vast Her ideas continue to spread like deception into The safely nestled barbed wire fence th...
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Poetry / breathless.
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i wake up in the middle of the night not fairing better than any hopeful burst of egocentricity that laid me beneath the pillars of my own misgivings i am undone the claws to chest do nothing but echo the moans the rattles held captive with snake to beast to belly to breath each eye watches slowly as i fade to the ticking of the clock and i alone can face this hot steam not better at replacing my breath and i have been here before under deep observation oxygen tents all manner of cleansing an...
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Humor/Satire / Mothering Sunday
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This poem needs to be edited, you use to when it should be too : "To far below to be touch, Held to high to be reach." It also appears as though you might have meant touched instead of touch in that stanza as well. The piece was very visual you had a good amount of metaphor, the end was really disappointing compared to the rest of the poem. The last stanza made me cringe because it totally destroyed what the rest of the piece brought me. You might consider a bit of a re-write in that regard. ...
Poetry / ~ The Innocent ~
this part of your piece : They’re Gods angels "They’re our children They’re sleeping peacefully in the arms of love They’re free souls They’re Gods angels They’re our children" should echo the rest, stating they are. it flows much better. Just a suggestion. Also, this line: "They lye on the grass" I wasnt sure if it was meant to be an incorrect spelling of lay?!?! All in all a very beautiful piece. I do feel like the ending did not have as much kick as the rest of the piece. Hope this was hel...
Poetry / -need title-
Beautiful, moving to a point of quiet understanding. The line with the word familiarity, got a little stuck when i read it, didnt flow as well as the rest of the piece. I also think the second use of the word alone could be left out, I think since the first part states it, then later on lonely pops up. the poem reminds me of learning stillness. Maybe use a simple title since this poem is very short, sweet. Maybe entitle it "Still" or "At One with Stillness" just a few thoughts. Keep up the go...
This piece flows very well, it definately rolls off of the mind, down the spine. Something definately worthy of spoken word. The rhyme scheme was good, a few spots that were mildly predictable, but that didnt take away from the piece. Keep up the good work.
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