anaisnais's profile

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AGE: 39
LOC: United Kingdom
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: November 02

Hi there, I am a disabled , happily married mother of two teenage boys.  I used to work in school as learning support assistant in classroom assistant capacity with under 8’s. I have various craft hobbies and in the last few months have found a deep desire to write poetry. I think poetry is an understated way we can make our voices heard and believe there is great revival happening in the reading market, where poetry is the niche to encourage people to read in small doses, able to put a piece down easier than a novel.  I believe strong stories and pictures can be painted in very few words enabling a reader to have opportunity to take further though and inspiration away with them.

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A red, orange, brown fuss in autumn once more as fog comes upon us Halloween ghouls to the door The trees turning yellows rains tumult and pour thunder bellows, winds blow cold with a roar and puddles they widen until they're almost a lake then out we need go for the leaves we must rake So we dig out our gloves and we wrap round our scarfs Then we shop for our loves, friends and then some other halves For Christmas approaches but fireworks come first as Guy Fawkes encroaches kids pennies ...
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Humor/Satire / Bathroom engaged
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There he blows on his way to the gents Book in hand we all know this is where he shall be occupied for the next half hour Imagination envisages him making himself comfortable There for a duration Intent on sinking his teeth into several chapters of the latest James Patterson Belt slowly snakes to the floor as he sits there concentrating on task in progress with trousers half mast supported by knees Book on lap A certain familiar thunder echoes through the house Stench slowly seeping t...
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Tell her you love her, reassure her Hold her close and cuddle her Treasure her Go see her, no matter how far away she lives Always make an effort let her know she is worthy Let her know that she is beautiful to you, worthy of your love Hold hands and kiss her Be unpredictable send flowers, love cards tokens of love, letters and appreciation Repeatedly visit her when sick Be there for her always Hold her when sad or upset Do not be afraid to show your feelings Nor share your hearts desi...
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 Plus-button Clarity
Poetry / Lunar mirror
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Like a volcanic deluge a noble golden amber and ruby exotic lunar mirror hangs suspended in the horizon. Attractive and inviting it decorates the heavens earths necessity warming the earth and baking our skin giving light and life enhancing each fragrant morning bud. Radiant its feisty angry glow ignites the sky pouring trillions of  light reflections to dance and swirl upon our waters seas rippling calm or waves crashing down each droplet becomes perfect diamond. An exquisite perfo...
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Short Story / Clock
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Faithful hands - stand test of time.
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Powerfully and masterfully penned! So much said in so few words and yet so many scenes go through the head on reading... Well done, you should try to push this one forward in my humble opinion!
I rathe rliked this write, sad and emotive as it was. There was nothing particualarly stood out, it just felt as though I was a bystander watching you go through the motions... Something very personal about it mind that makes yoou feel as though you are pryinginto someone elses lives... Overall in my opinion I'd be trying to publish this one...well done and good luck!
These things are those close to my own heart as needlessly such abuse s left to continue unchecked in a world where we are supposed to help one another.... From this write I wonder if you've read my own writes 'Mugabe's tsunami' and 'GAP in Trade'...mmm. there is anothe r too along such linesas thre first but can't think right now, and then a couple similar to 'Serbias uneducated..ignored?'. Seems we have much in common I think! Great write, could perhaps be beefed up in places to add strengt...
Lol. very good, there are a couple of easily correctable errors, in particular watch your full stops, commas and Caapitals... There was also a sentence on the other page ....amiable curiosity....., there was something about it that didn't seem tof it right other than it seemed out of context with the age at which you would be writing for with this - maybe? Again a slight rethink would easily fix this. Overall i think this has potnetial to be a splendiid piece for children, there's something v...
Okay, I'd advise that this piece is carefully edited, all the comments from the previous reviews stand, as it reads a little uncomfortably in places, either because the tense is not right or because you have worded the sentence a little strangely. If you go back to this piece after a few weeks away from it and read through it slowly, as if it were written by another these things should leap out at you. With regards publishing, would I purchase, basically no, this is not my usual type of read....