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AGE: 17
LOC: Orinda, CA
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: July 23

Hi, i’m Amanda, but you can call me Mav.

hello you’re a robot me too

palper unt indenous flabberghast wonderous ortifications liff.

all i want to avoid is… a void.
[i want to exist{why am i failing?}]

“sing that song about clocks on fire.”

if you want to send me an IM, then I’m idiot garageband

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They say our generation is apathetic To the world’s problems But it’s not apathy, it’s just a feeling of helplessness. If I rounded up the kids and got a general opinion, It would sound something like this: So you’re saying that if I bike to school, There won’t be as much CO2 in the air But I know that I won’t make too much of a difference. So why should I even care? They say “If you want to change the world, go to the Gro meeting at lunch” Get real: A group of high school kids is never able ...
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“The reason that atoms from ionic bonds is to make everything neutral. For example, Chlorine needs one electron to have a full outer shell, Sodium has to get rid of one electron to have a full outer shell, so when they meet up, Chlorine’s magnetic force pulls in one electron from the Sodium, and they trade and become neutral. Yes, of course that was what we were doing, we were studying for chemistry. Actually, that was what we were supposed to be doing, but we were really going to an abandone...
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Poetry / red head
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there once was a boy that i knew when i was young, a boy with shining red hair who was afraid of clowns, and he started the habit early, really because sometimes he'd write on the pavement with crayola, and the teachers would yell come to think of it, the teachers would yell quite often perhaps because this boy was the type that didn't do what was good, he didn't do his daily reading mostly all days, in fact, he'd do silly little things, but always get off, and his mother who always wore abun...
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Haiku/Senryu / Allocation
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all over my hand "allocation" in black ink I am a huge mess
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*[who]* the end of all my backtracking was always here hands tangled in the ocean surf's white sea urchins in holes all the world has the same dreams they do [what] a melody like a bubble a song like the hues of a horizon of lies because that's all it's ever been pin all your dreams [the world's dreams] up on a picket fence that's all they'll be pin them while you're young they cost a nickel[without inflation] ballons without inflation [when] what a feeling when your feet are over your head w...
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Haiku/Senryu / cheap with the creds
well, I guess this was interesting, and I'll take advantage of its theme, though the credits are very few.
Poetry / Touch Me
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this was a good monolouge, though i've never really heard of a monolouge that rhymes. Well, i have nothing much more to say, because i think this piece was really good. i kinda think it's a poem more than a monolouge, though.
Haiku/Senryu / Writers Drug Of Choice
nice. I like the concept a lot. I guess if you say "writer's only friends" I don't know it sounds kinda awkward that you're not saying "a writer's" but I know about the whole 575 scheme, so maybe say writers' or maybe a writer's one friend or something. but altogether, it's a good concept. And not everyone might know what "joe" means, but actually just keep it in cause it creates the right atmosphere
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