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Poetry / Paradox
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Lost in perpetual darkness,do memories stir within. Emotion no longer ruling me,will i step out the door. Haunted by thoughts of what once was,knowing within cannot occur ever again looking to the horizon. Consumed by what could be again,does heartache become the tool to my own demise. Absorbing the poison spoken from behind hollow words,will you ascend unto the twilight in Euphoric bliss.. Such sweet irony, as the angels restrain while the Demons entice. Two parts of the same whole conflict ...
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Poetry / Dead
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So dead inside worlds away, as leaves glide unto the night. Fire reigns from above as battle rages before my sight Destined to spill the blood of my enemies, Dead to the world as corpses rot, does the stench rise. One by one they fall, still they come. Endless torture as screams ride the wind all around. Into the night,running through the void of sensless slaughter, All who died, never remembered; as strife and pestilence run abroad the land. Moving foward kill by kill,lives wasted by sacrifi...
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Novel Treatments / Hollow_Book one
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Intro: Long ago there were three kindoms at war. Wydor, a warrior race known only for savagery and lack of mercy to their enemies. Dr'per A highly advanced technilogical race known for their brilliance. Finally we come to Freus a mystic people with unatural earthly powers. Though these kingdoms are at war that does not pertain to this tale at the moment. "As the dawn greets the new day so our journey begins" writes, a hooded figure aside the candles burning flame. Journal entry 1. A.k.a Tren...
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Novel Treatments / Hollow_Book one
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Intro: Long ago there were three kingdoms at war. Wydor, a warrior race known only for savagery and lack of mercy to their enemies. Dr'per A highly advanced technillogical race known for their brilliance. Finally we come to Freus a mystic people with unatural earthly powers. Though these kingdoms are at war that does not pertain to this tale at the moment. "As the dawn greets the new day so our journey begins" writes, a hooded figure aside the candles burning flame. Journal entry 1. It's bee...
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Poetry / battle
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Out of nowhere does evil appear, As blood rains down upon the earth. Watchng the endless slaughter does the wicked grin appear.Madness everywhere,while heads fly by. Agents of evil come,control is what they seek.Left with no choice will i embrace the evil. How unfortunate that they make me act,without thought or hesitation do i deliver death upon them; Weaving though untold numbers, a leg her intesines there as vital organs fall.In the end,last to be standing does the peace take the madness a...
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Novel Treatments / Daddy Alb--Chapter 1
this was a fascinating tale i was caught up from the beginning you caught my attention straight from the begining i'd like to see more of this
Haiku/Senryu / Pulp
awesome job
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Poetry / Autumnal Equinox
varigated how about filter through the variety of canopy trees?
Novel Treatments / Among Us - Part 2
This is truly attention getting as how well you get into the plot with these characters it carries the reader from beggining to end and all honesty we all know how hard that is to do all in all i thought this was a truly good piece keep it up and keep writing well done.
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