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AGE:
25
LOC: United Kingdom
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: September 28
LOC: United Kingdom
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: September 28
Vegetarian, multi coloured blanket wrapped busy busy dancing little urchin
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Anomalies of the Third Tongue Part 1 She was a middle class girl who indulged high tea and higher morals. “I love you all the time” whispered her soft fleshy lips. “I feel it all,” I retorted, sharper than the thorns that would surround her rosebud mouth. Sweeping a stylised fringe from where it had caught in her bovine length eyelashes, I spoke in guttural persuasions. “There’s a curse on this town, I’ve been a fool.” Subliminally I heard her thoughts processing, like the sweet smell of lili...
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Picking my thoughts like chicken bones
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Picking my brain like chicken bones
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Makes me think of house of flying daggers with the scene in the bamboo
The first two lines are really captivating but the third doesn't read as well as it could with them
Delicately beautiful, I like the natural essence of this poem
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