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AGE:
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LOC: Lafayette, LA
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: July 05
LOC: Lafayette, LA
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: July 05
I’ve always been a writer. I wrote my first novel at sixteen. I guess I thought I was the next S.E. Hinton. That novel is still stored away somewhere. In the last year, I’ve decided to pursue writing and publication again. If you like what I post, feel free to check out my blogs.
http://soonergirl@wordpress.com
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What if the sexy, sophisticated, Carrie Bradshaw were not so sophisticated? What if she was a clueless thirty-something thrown back into the murky waters of the dating pool after the end of an eight-year relationship? What if this real-live person’s life was a little less Sex and the City, and a lot more sitcom? If you can imagine this, then you know what the concept is for my book All I Want for Christmas is A Real Good Man. All I Want for Christmas is A Real Good Man chronicles my dating ex...
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Chapter One It was hotter than hell and the damn mosquitoes were like demons from the fire itself. Sydney sat in the back courtyard, smoking a cigarette, ears turned to the small monitor for the slightest sound of movement from the bedroom. She exhaled a stream of smoke, half expecting the smoke to be absorbed by the clinging, inescapable humidity. The bayou was silent tonight. Everything was silent. Silent enough to give one the chills if one was superstitious enough. She wasn’t. But maybe ...
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Yesterday was Sunday. A very beautiful Easter Sunday. I was able to spend some time at Corey and Christy’s. Ate some delicious barbeque and talked about dancing. We talked about my earlier blog, the blog where I described my anxiety about dancing. I said I needed to to do something to distract my dance partner away from my two left feet and complete lack of rhythm. Our plan? Cleavage. Dazzle him with cleavage and he’ll never feel the pain in his toes. Hmmmmm.... Sounded good in theory. So, I ...
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Ahhhh...I’m sitting here, enjoying a beautiful spring morning, drinking my favorite coffee. It’s a great start to the weekend. And I’ve been dying to write this blog since yesterday afternoon. :) Yesterday, I was fiddling with my computer, for some reason it wouldn’t connect to the internet, I could log onto Yahoo Messenger and MySpace Messenger, but not the internet. While I was trying to figure all this out, a message window popped up. I’d talked to this guy a few times before, so I started...
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………………………………........................................................................ I groaned inwardly as the guy across from me droned on and on. I stifled a yawn as he started story number twelve about why his relationships haven’t worked out. Maybe if he’d stop talking and actually listen, he might have better luck. And maybe, just maybe, if he’d not tell EVERYTHING on the first date, he’d have better luck too. How does this happen to me? How do I have the absolute worst dates? I let him...
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One thing that really stands out on the first read is that the story is a little hard to follow. Maybe following a more linear storyline would help with this. I especially got lost in between the "Hands in the air", then the jump to putting the ad on craigslist. I think editing out some of the not so necessary information would be helpful too. For example the section about dealing with people, maybe just a short mention of that. It is really necessary that we know about your gaming history? I...
Definitely a good definition for originality. Never really thought about it that way. :)
I like the tension between the two characters. I like that you leave the reader guessing when she says, "You know what happens." I'd love to know what happens. I would like to have a little more description of the characters, so I can get a good mental picture. I also wonder what your target audience is here. I'm assuming you're targeting the older Potter fans. Or are you targeting a general older audience? As someone who has read some of the Potter books, I had a hard time reading this with ...
Loved it! The only suggestion I have is to take the part out where you mention the Monty Python and the next blog. I think it interrupts the flow a bit. Maybe you could add more? I loved the exaggeration and the references to The Hunt for Red October. Thanks for sharing!
I definitely chuckled a little at the end. A very amusing story. Some suggestions I have.....I'd leave out the first paragraph and start the story with the second paragraph. You can add in the details of your age at the time in that paragraph as well as location. The "characters", you and Mikey, are well-written. I would like to know more about the setting. Is it hot? What does the neighborhood look like? All in all, it was a good read. Thanks for sharing!
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