This is very cute. it is easy to read, and seems like it would fit nicely in a childrens book with a nice picture of an iguana. Very cute. Thank you for sharing.

This is lovely. It is pure and bitter and I adore it. However the end leaves me missing. You have all this beauty then you just leave it with "I deal with it, my way." Try and make it more poetic. More meaningful. Otherwise, it's beautiful.

I love the picture this piece paints. How you describe in each stanza different types of theatre. However, it is not that catching. Try and rephrase make it sound more poetic. Also it has little to no structure. If this is suppose to be a free verse then try and push it all together as one instead of spacing it out. Spacing it out to me makes it seem like it is suppose to have a structure but you can't make it work. You have a marvelous idea. Just work with it.

You have a great messgae and it's very beautifully worded. However the punctuation of it makes it hard to read. You might want to go through and break it up into seperate sentances so it flows a little better. Other wise, you have an inspiring piece of work.

I don't know if this is such a positive quote. Ironic however since I just read one about being sober. I suppose I can understand where the author is coming from but try and think a little more positive. It might appeal to your reader a little better. But that's a personal opinion. None-the-less, good work given the content.

This is a very profound quote you have here. Sounds like something from the greats! Good Work.

This is a very inspriational quote. It sounds like something that would be on the back of a self-help book as a preview. Maybe that didn't sounds as I wanted it to, but I think you get the idea. It's a good thing! I really like this quote, you did an excellent job. Keep up the good work!

Well I am sure you know that your punctuation is terrible. But other then that, I feel that this quote would flow better if it was: "The valley of illusion is located just one click short of the truth." It just reads like you got in a hurry to post something and forgot the rest of the words.

Very nice. Simple, to the point. Like it!

Very nice. Makes me want to relax when I read it. Then it makes me feel like a wino.