_Marybeth_'s profile
AGE:
102
LOC: United States
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: October 16
LOC: United States
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: October 16
Hello, my name is Marybeth. I write stories mostly of adventure, and excitement. I love writing stories that have to deal with kids having no parents, have lost them, or something along those lines. Yes I am young, but I have most of my life planned. I either want to become a published book author, or a marine biologist! I write song lyrics about my feeling, but really they are more like poems. I also draw what I want, I like to draw people, yet I haven’t been drawing lately. I would love to meet other kids like myself. Ones who are just starting, or still have flaws in their writing. And please be open about my work, but don’t message me saying that I stink at writing, or that I will never be a famous writer, because everyone no matter …
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Do I have six words yet?
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You're a narcassistic homosexual stupid alcoholic fool You've done so much to hurt me Oh, you don't even know But yet I still love you so You took my heart away And never gave it back For now my heart is just a hole Without you By my side I may just die Die from sadness From madness From the dead flowers From the lonely hours That are existent because you're gone I want you back Oh, how badly I want you back For all your worth You throw yourself away You give up You move on too quickly Someti...
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The day we leave this place Will the world be better off? Will they have had enough? Enough of all this hate against race Of religion being a battle Of the government that some call corrupt Of going up the creek without a paddle Of how everyone wants to erupt Because of all this war and insanity That we face too much? And how little girls act so bratty From all those TV shows and such? How about all those ignorant minds That hate just because people are different And the people who plant thos...
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Each petal of a flower that I pluck is my love for you, and I have an endless flower bed.
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Call me a geek, call me a nerd, if you want. But labels are for soup cans Not people!
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This is sweet and romantic. It sounds like a line that would be said in a chick flick...which would make me cry...just too sweet...good job.
I like the message that I get out of this. The rhyming seems forced. The last line should be changed, or the last two lines should be deleted. By the way, in the third to the last line "dear" is supposed to be spelt "dare".
This could make a nice rap song, well kind of. I compeletly 100% feel you on this subject! I too have gone through this. There were some spelling errors, but I understood it :D Nice work
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