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AGE: 101
LOC: United States
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: September 28

Hello, my name is Marybeth. I write stories mostly of adventure, and excitement. I love writing stories that have to deal with kids having no parents, have lost them, or something along those lines. Yes I am young, but I have most of my life planned. I either want to become a published book author, or a marine biologist! I write song lyrics about my feeling, but really they are more like poems. I also draw what I want, I like to draw people, yet I haven’t been drawing lately. I would love to meet other kids like myself. Ones who are just starting, or still have flaws in their writing. And please be open about my work, but don’t message me saying that I stink at writing, or that I will never be a famous writer, because everyone no matter …

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Version 1
11 Reviews   7 Comments
Do I have six words yet?
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Poetry / So
Version 1
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You're a narcassistic homosexual stupid alcoholic fool You've done so much to hurt me Oh, you don't even know But yet I still love you so You took my heart away And never gave it back For now my heart is just a hole Without you By my side I may just die Die from sadness From madness From the dead flowers From the lonely hours That are existent because you're gone I want you back Oh, how badly I want you back For all your worth You throw yourself away You give up You move on too quickly Someti...
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Poetry / When We're Gone
Version 1
0 Reviews   0 Comments
The day we leave this place Will the world be better off? Will they have had enough? Enough of all this hate against race Of religion being a battle Of the government that some call corrupt Of going up the creek without a paddle Of how everyone wants to erupt Because of all this war and insanity That we face too much? And how little girls act so bratty From all those TV shows and such? How about all those ignorant minds That hate just because people are different And the people who plant thos...
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Quotes / Petal Love V.2
Version 2
20 Reviews   14 Comments
Each petal of a flower that I pluck is my love for you, and I have an endless flower bed.
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Quotes / Labels
Version 1
35 Reviews   13 Comments
Call me a geek, call me a nerd, if you want. But labels are for soup cans Not people!
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Journalism / 6 word memoir
This touched my heart. This is sad. I read the notes for reviewer part, and I bet your mum will live for her birthday, you have to be positive about it! Great memior, even though sad and heart-breaking, good luck.
Poetry / STRESSFUL PAIN
Hmm, your poetry is starting to look like rap. The word "stressfull" is spelt with one L. Im a bit stumped though. What does the word "undresianed" mean? I've never heard of the word. I looked it up, and I don't think it is a word, if you could just get back to me on that note I might understand it better. But over-all since I am reading this like a poem it is weird, but when I view it as rap lyrics, it makes it more interesting.
Poetry / REST
I think it would be better if each line would be seperated, like in your poem "stressed". The word "cuz" is just weird, I know you mean the word "cause" but it still is just weird. Same with the word "wit" in the sentence " I shot my family wit ugly words...", those two words just seem like they don't belong, or at least their spelling doesn't belong. Also the number 2, usually people type/write out numbers under one-hundred, usually. That is also an odd thing to put in here, try to type out ...
Poetry / STRESSED
This is a very beginner poem. Keep working and you may be a great poet someday, but it takes (sometimes) hard work. It sounds like the rhyming is forced, extremely forced. Poetry doesn't have to rhyme, it may help when reading, to make the poem go faster, or to make it more interesting and intriguing. Note: the word "hart" is spelt wrong, it is spelt "heart"
Poetry / Pitch Black
Interesting. At first I thought the poem was about a very cold person, but in the end I'm guessing it is about perfect lovers? Soulmates? I found it cool how you didn't really seem to care about rhyming, like this poem was meant to be plain and straightfoward, as love (I think) should really be just plain and straightfoward so you aren't so mysterioius. Oh no, that was just me rambling on. But all in all this poem is interesting and unique.