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You already know that I think this is a great story so far ;) If you need any HTML formatting help (or anyone else for that matter) look me up as I'm also a webmaster. Wist

The ever-immortal dragon and the dragon slayer. I didn't notice any errors. Nice poem. :) I enjoyed reading it very much. Wist

This was a very well written poem. I certainly get the feel for your dark character there and the evil and darkness in and around him. This poem also has a nice balance and flow as well. Keep up the good work! ;) Wist

One thing I might have done to make this easier to read is separate the paragraphs with spaces there. This was an interesting read and through your dialogue and descriptions I have a clear idea to the starts of what is going on. I'm curious as to what happens next and if the Prince lives. I'm also curious as to what happened with this girl to get him injured like that. Very good work. Editing Notes: To fix the problem, ive (I've) arch baronys (baronies) any had a chance to die. Feint (Faint) ...

This was a really pretty poem. I felt that you were describing how women are similar to the Goddess of the moon and showed the many qualities of women like you would the moon's cycles. Very nice. Editing Notes: Artemis’s Daughter (Should be Artemis') Wist