WOOTMAN's profile

AGE: 15
LOC: Hephzibah, GA
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: March 16

Yo! I am WOOTMAN, ruler of the brainwaves and pathways to your heart!
I’m a poet, plain and simple. I’ll tell you what your heart wants to hear, hold it in my hands for all to say, and then let it go, giving it flight so it may fly. I’m also a heavy thinker, so don’t be surprised if my thoughts end up somewhere… I picked my picture (which is the symbol for Chaos, just so you know) to express who I am. I’m quite the chaotic person, and some of my poetry reflects that. I’m one to find love in a dark place.

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Ever see me cry? Ever see me broken, torn down At all? You did all that with a mear sentence. Now I feel as if I'd lost something I treasured most. I hadn't felt pain like that, since... well, never. But never asked you to break me. But you did anyway, refusing to even tell me the full truth at first. That hurt the worst. You'll always be my first love, But you won't be the last. See all the pieces laying around? Broken glass, shattered beyond repair. Yet you delicately step around the shards...

willing to let the inner me out so i can breath

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7 Reviews 52 Comments

Blood. A lot of it. Running down your arms and into mine As we embrace, clinging to each other as we dance A waltz of death. I gave this to you, kissing you lightly And watch in grim satisfaction as you begin to cry Tears of blood. Love is no fleeting thing, to be enjoyed for a moment and then thrown away. I love you. You broke my heart. If you die, who is to blame? Perhaps none. But as we continue to dance I pull you tighter, but you fight to pull away As you know how this dance will end. Yo...

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3 Reviews 28 Comments

I hate what you did to my heart, you know? I loved you. I really did. And you said you loved me back But now, looking into my brutal hindsight I wonder, did you mean it? Or was it something you felt you had to say? At first, I wanted to kill. You, me, anyone, that's how hurt I was. But you were blind to my pain, Moving on as you had always done, not looking back. I want to snap my fingers and have you gone, dead Those memories lost to me forever. But it's impossible. Such a wish would never b...

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9 Reviews 56 Comments

I never made sense until now.

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"Brevity is the Soul of It": Six-Word Memoirs about the Creative Life

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3 Reviews 2 Comments

I know you're scared. I never understood the pure fascination behind the water Slowly coming up to my feet and lapping quietly around them. I know you're scared. Crying out my name as I'm pulled away, lost in the tide Voices unheard calling me deeper... I know you're scared. Don't cry for me. I made it a point, despite all the warnings, To cross that line in the sand. I saw the freedom in a world behind that blue water. Come join me. Don't be scared. Just the two of us, locked in an embr...

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by jalubcarrey

Dude! This is so random and funny it totally warmed my heart! Reginald is a cool character, the kind you don't see: the sane crazy people. Smart, funny, and a good piece of work. A nice plot twist at the end revealing he was at a mental hospital, which explained his previous actions.

by jalubcarrey

A simply beautiful poem. Being a singer myself, I can imagine the song sung. That last line, some punctuation could be used to let it drift off, because read as it is, it kind of cuts off abruptly. Other than tha, I can find nothing that irks me. good job!

by Drolf

A beutiful idea. Needs to be a little more connected for my tastes, but other than that, cool. Everyone's personalities are well understood (forgot my black jacket!) and overall a good story line. Hope you don't mind, but I feel like writing a story about MY experience.

by Drolf

Greatest last line EVER. "We're on a FUCKING ISLAND IN SPACE!"

by Jedikid129

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