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AGE: 20
LOC: Muskegon, MI
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: November 10
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Poetry / Sin
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Walking again down the road of sin It rains quite a bit on the road of sin A cold rain like a cold sweat One cigarette closer to death Breath it in and hold my breath Its not so bad, not like you’d think Imagine water in the kitchen sink Filling up and spilling out That is what sin is about Experience tangibility Enjoying everything you see Never hide from what is there Embrace it, love it, give it care Sin, we say, is a dirty word And were dirty people in a dirty world Its what we crav...
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Poetry / philopian tubes
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Im just a fake man with all the time and no real plan A little dust and a little flesh, wrap it up and give it breath On its feet it stands and walks and learning sounds it learns to talk But it is not true Behind the eyes wrapped up in face Is a little rat to broken to race He licks his wounds and waits And waits Waits for sky to blue and grass to green Dwelling in all his thoughts obscene His past was failed, his future frail His present held in a rusty pale Leaking out, spilling out, the ...
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Poetry / Hard
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How can it be so hard To find To see To understand Somone Anyone No ones here Why can't  I find her? What I mean Is this Loneliness Lonely lonely loneliness They all say im great, im fun, im charming lies If they were true, would I be so by myself? I'd be with somone else Anyone else But theres no one else Maybe shes just not there Shes not here Maybe she's not anywhere A siren she might be To call me in the night Whisper in my ear While  asleep "Im here" "Does you dr...
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Poetry / See
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I would take you Take you to a time And to a place April fourth Nineteen Sixty Eight Memphis Tenisee See it well See it very well A man stands He looks out And he dreams He see's a people Not many But one One people As he looks And as he dreams Another man looks And another man dreams The things he dreams I dare not wonder But he looks Looks through a scope Before he is finished A single bullet flies Flies through air Flies through a cheek And makes it's rest With a man's life A man with a dr...
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Poetry / Life Story
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Mother passed, God is hate. perfect
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That was a most excellent piece for sure. I like the date at the bottom. It just adds to the vivid imagery throughout the poem. It hooks you in and draws you along so to speak.Good work friend
Poetry / Passing
The curtness of this poem reminds of how we act when a loved one leaves us. We give short dry-cut responses. "Honor amidst pain, Strength amidst sorrow" Is a wonderfull couple of lines. The last line of the first stanza feels like it was added just to keep to the form of the poem, try it in your head without that line and I think you might like it, especialy if you added a "the" to the first line of that stanza. I like the use of color words in the last stanza. It gives the image of purity wi...
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