I can totally dig where you're coming from with this one. This short story/article needs more substance to me. It doesn't hold my attention the way I feel it should when talking about death and repayment for sins or whatever the case may be. I think this work is publishable, but there can be more depth, energy, and deathly excitement to this. I totally dig this line: "For me, it would take an eternity for my entire life to flash before me, for I am one who has lived well past my due." I also ...

This one did not really hold my interest. I love the use of vivid adjectives. You can really picture the scenes described. The story doesn't lead to a plot or anything to me. more substance is necessary. I can see the talents and abilities are clearly present, just needs more.

How did the title Seven come about? I can dig it!

Awesome! I totally dig this! We all need a "reawakening" sometimes. Individuals get too caught up in the mundane, and lose touch with reality, who we are, or our purpose(s). As a woman, this occurs too often! Write on!