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LOC: Greensboro, NC
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My Silent Verse I’m sitting in silence Trying to write this Trying to write anything But I can’t seem to stay in the write frame of mind To get my brain to maintain A dag on thing This is some bullshit I know I can do this Bitch…just fucking focus! Get your shit together So you can be the best freelance writer ever My brain is in a race with itself To see who can “literally” win This godforsaken writing competition Scatterbrained and lost I can’t stay focused on one complete thought The race ...
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INNERMOST WANTS I love you. I love you for eternity. For life itself. I want to be your… Best Friend, Lover, Companion, Your EVERYTHING. I want to be your wife. I want to birth your unlimited amount of children I want to be their… Mother, Teacher, Best Friend. I want you to be proud of me and who I am. I want you to want to show me off so to speak. I want you to support the dreams and endeavors that I speak. I want to be proud of you and who you are. I want to show you off so to speak. I want...
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Does True Love Still Exist…#2 First let me say… What kind of bullshit question is this? An Enormous love Consuming Love I Never want to leave you Love Call each other 90x a day Love A Sickening Love A “You two get on my damn nerves” …(to other people) Love Yes, true love does still exist! And no, this is not some nonsensical, idiotic myth. Truth of the matter is, that love never left, It’s “your” ears that went deaf. This love is real. One you can definitely feel…. All through your soul, and ...
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AN ENORMOUS LOVE CONSUMING LOVE I NEVER WANT TO LEAVE YOU LOVE CALL EACH OTHER 90X A DAY LOVE A SICKENING LOVE A "YOU ALL GET ON MY NERVES (TO OTHER PEOPLE) LOVE DOES TRUE LOVE STILL EXIST? IS THIS FEELING JUST A MYTH? OR JUST SOME STRAIGHT UP BULLSHIT THAT DOESN'T EXIST WHY IS THIS LOVE SO HARD TO FIND WHEN YOU CAN CONSTANTLY SAY YOU WANT TO BE MINE, BUT DON'T WANT TO MAKE THE TIME TO TRY IS THIS THE" NEW AGE" LOVE, THAT ONLY CONSISTS OF SEX, W/OUT ANY REALNESS YOU WANT TO TOUCH, KISS, LICK,...
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Misogynistic tendencies you have clearly shown me. Violating one’s space is not in good moral taste. To obsessively compulse causes feelings of disgust. You have a problem indeed, and it’s not me that you need. You need a world all your own that will allow you to penetrate the depths of its soul, until your dick is left cold. Feelings of anger and angst My mind cannot fathom how you can put me up against such an ultimate test. No words to describe how you have made me feel inside Over, and ov...
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Awesome! I totally dig this! We all need a "reawakening" sometimes. Individuals get too caught up in the mundane, and lose touch with reality, who we are, or our purpose(s). As a woman, this occurs too often! Write on!
This one did not really hold my interest. I love the use of vivid adjectives. You can really picture the scenes described. The story doesn't lead to a plot or anything to me. more substance is necessary. I can see the talents and abilities are clearly present, just needs more.
I can totally dig where you're coming from with this one. This short story/article needs more substance to me. It doesn't hold my attention the way I feel it should when talking about death and repayment for sins or whatever the case may be. I think this work is publishable, but there can be more depth, energy, and deathly excitement to this. I totally dig this line: "For me, it would take an eternity for my entire life to flash before me, for I am one who has lived well past my due." I also ...
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