UncleHarry's profile

AGE: 15
LOC: Mckinleyville, CA
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: June 07

I’m a 14 year old boy that enjoys poetry, and creative writing. I am just learning and hope this site will be a value in building skills in my writing. I like music, sports, chillin, girls, and hanging out with friends. I’m home schooled so I joined Urbis to interact with others, and learn different writing styles. I think learning to critique, and being critiqued on my writing willing be a great learning tool. And will help me to express myself through the art of poetry.

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I'm gonna hook this fish if it takes all night lookie there I've got a bite he took the bait hes gonna run oh my gosh this is so much fun he starts to run what a fight this may be my hardest night what a day this has been sitting her with my best friend the fish, the pole, and the bait I'm forced to do nothing but sit and wait drinking a cola wile staring out to sea I might have to call my family its really big I'm not a liar I pulled in a gosh darn tire

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clouds of softness in the sky filling every one's eyes no birds no bees no leaves just naked trees a chill that bites turns everything white nothing to do on this night just day dreaming bursts of color fluttering butterflies trees green grass green everything green roses bloom silky hot sunny days boats sail by inviting cool ponds another season gone

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Amuse / Entertain / Warm a few hearts

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fuzzy little bear playing in the meadow grass chasing butterflies

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Roses bloom by day. Closing up to sleep at night. kissed by morning dew.

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by MrBrooks

This was very good. This had a grate rhyme to it. The wordplay was fascinating. I liked how u told us the meening to the whole story.this was great. good job!!!

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by marshmellotoast

This was very heart warming. The wordplay was perfect. This painted a great painting in my mind. I liked this a lot. I thought this was about love, thats my opinion

by wise2owls

This was a very funny piece. The wordplay was great. I loved that Ken wanted to put boots in the pot. This paiinted a very colorul ,and amusing painting in my mind. GREAT JOB!!!

by purseonwheels

This was very well thought out. I understand that this is a novel, but this still REALLY GOOD. This painted a very graceful painting in my mind. This had a very detailing wordplay. I loved this sentence , "she would look back upon it and remember it like a gaping hole ripped into the middle of a soft-cotton day". GREAT JOB!!!

by onlywish

This was a very good piece.The wordplay is wonderful.The syllable count is correct,575.This painted a very colorful picture in my mind. Great job.

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