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AGE: 26
LAST LOGIN: August 05

Most of my short stories are based on life experience, either my own or those close to me. The best stories are the “you should have been there” stories told correctly. I hope you enjoy- be sure to let me know.

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Short Story / The Return
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THE RETURN Cassidy-Lynne Peters “My king,” Okatavio breathed from his bowed position, “Sir Richard has done it again.” Damion let his breath out as he slowly covered his face with his hands. Damion was in his private chambers, it was late. He had done it again. Damion prayed every night in the castle’s small stone chapel for his younger brother. Damion prayed that his devil induced interest would withdraw. “Where is my brother?” Damion choked through his palms. “He has been locked within his...
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Short Story / Priceless
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Priceless Cassidy Lynne Peters We were taught every penny was a gift from god. Growing up in the sixties was a relentless reminder of money’s worth. Just a few short years ago no one had any. That was before my time though. The only reason I understood the word ‘save’ was because ‘more money’ meant ‘more candy.’ I’d grown out of collecting the drowning worms along the sidewalk a few months ago. I’d moved on to bigger and better things. So this one morning I had schemed my way into a whole ni...
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Short Story / Armageddon
hmm, its like this was written by two different people. There are moments when good writing begins the scentence and then bad writing ends it. some sentences are very nice, well flowing, good word choice. then the very next scentence is blunt, dull and not well thought out. Also this story needs more substance. more description of action. or perhaps more action in general. but i feel like this could be an interesting piece with a little more focus on each scentence. touchograe
this was an interesting to read, the imagery and word choice was very good. Not overwritten and not lacking substance. the only negative is that i'm not entirely sure what i think was going in is right. touchograe
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First, I would read more of this. I'm just wondering who El is, or more like what she is? a nurse? companion? i don't think there was any indication of what her purpose was. touchograe
Short Story / The Creek
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Short Story / winter
pretty good, i didn't like some of the word choice, a permanent feeling beer- but it's your piece. the last word too, didn't do it for me, but over all it was a good write. touchograe
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Novel Treatments / Twenty-Three
Short Story / Artificial Dreams
Short Story / The New Gods

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