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AGE: 15
LOC: West Grove, PA
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: January 28

Hello everyone my name is Hannah and my one goal in life is be published. I know that I am only 14 and the chance of me publishing is slim but I will work as hard as I can to reach my goal no matter how long it takes me. I hope you have a chance to read my stories, and I hope I get some helpful feed back, I really need it right now.

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If I could spend an evening with anyone it would probably be Hermione Granger from the Harry Potter books. In my mind she seems like the perfect role model. She’s smart and not ashamed to show it. She has her values in place, and she doesn’t allow herself to break them. But aside from that she isn’t perfect. She makes mistakes, which I think is an inevitable part of life. In the books she is described as having frizzy uncontrollable hair, which shows to every girl who reads Harry Potter that...
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Young Adult / Gunshot
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I doubt many of you have heard a gunshot ring through your neighborhood, but if you have then you must now the terror and fear that is felt only seconds later after the trigger is pulled. I will remember that day forever, I can still hear the gunshot sounding in my ears when I think back to the memory. There are many things that happened that day that make it so memorable. One, it was the day that I met Greg, and two; it was the day that I heard my first gunshot, but certainly not my last. “Y...
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Criticism / Ignorant Teens
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One day at school a couple of people decided not to speak. Turns out that they weren't speaking to raise awareness for gays and lesbians. That's such a great cause, I thought. Having grown up with two very opinionated parents, I started to have very strong opinions of my own at a young age. One of the opinions would be Pro gay/lesbian marriage. I believe that everyone should have a chance to choose what do to with their life, and if this is a "Free" country who are we to stop people from pur...
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 Plus-button Clarity
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How come the sky is blue? Well, my dear child, it’s blue just for you. How come the moon shines in the night? Well, my dear child, the moon is showing its happiness and delight. How come the ocean is so big? Well, my dear child, because the world is so big. How come you answer all my questions? Because, my dear child, to me you’re worth fortunes.
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I was watching a marathon of America's Next Top Model when to my surprise I realized that this season there were two plus size models in the running to become the next Top Model. But after taking a good look at those two girls I realized that they weren't plus sized at all. They were average sized women with beautiful looks and great potential. It just goes to show that labeling people will never be any good. Why would anyone want to be a plus sized model when they can starve themselves and e...
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Journal, Diary, & Blogging / Untitled
When I first read this it reminded me a series that I am currently reading called "Wicked".It's a actiond romance. It may be YA but I think you should read it, there are some great insights into hating and loving someone at the same time. As to the piece I loved it. It seemed so true, it made a lasting image in my mind. Also it seems to flow well, and it seems like you put your heart and soul into this which gives it a lot a feeling and life. I liked it all in all.
Journal, Diary, & Blogging / The Wounded Bear
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Journal, Diary, & Blogging / what is the meaning of this nonsense?
If you want to be taken seriously as a writer, spell check first, plus punctuation. This made no sense to me, I could see your main point but the story was kind of confusing. Also if your writing a piece that is going to be shown on the internet for all to see don't use talk in IM it makes you seem young and naive.
Journal, Diary, & Blogging / My First Rigorous Analysis of the Irrational
I think you make a great point, as a teenage these days I can safely tell you that looks are a lot, but I can also tell you they aren't everything. Having a personality and being smart are very important to some guys, and I know they are important for girls. I loved your piece but I found it just a little cliche. This is a topic that is explored all the time, but for such a worn subject you did a very good job and breathing life into it.
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Criticism / the fate of our land
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