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AGE: 27
LOC: Grand Island, NY
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: July 26

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Short Story / Six word Memoir
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Disguise the lies with beautiful eyes
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Poetry / The Last Cast
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The Last Cast DCC Something is telling me To turn away from these waves But I cast my final line Into the hearts of the brave Save me I need some hope My feelings are a camouflage Washed away with soap Little left to do With all this spare time This may have been my last line
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Imagination Will Carry by dcc How far can you go alone Travel to places listed unknown Somewhere that doesn't exist Only in your mind a hazy mist Take me there take me back The world I live in is under attack How come I feel so depressed Try to stay focused its hard to digest A place of peace with no madness The jewel of heaven minus the sadness All I can do is just think about what if Walking right off the edge of the cliff I can live forever and be content Time spent here is time well spent...
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The Lucky Ones Die First by DCC Carry on young nation. Bombs and blood stain their land. Check your baggage and remain secure. Just take the upper hand. Forge on brave nation. Killing is the right way To all that oppose you. Just blow them all away. Strive on young nation. And swear upon your "book" Those who choose to "believe" Its time to move your rook. Pray on sweet nation. The lord has saved his grace. Walking ghosts are the past. Whispers in empty space. Dream on young nation. The peopl...
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Poetry / Forgotten beauty
This almost reads like a song, I like it but could I make one recommendation? Maybe provide the reader with a little more information about the lie in the third line. Did they lie about not loving you? Or not remaining faithful? Obviously lies are often the source for problems in relationships, but given the deep emotion expressed later in the piece it may help bring it some clarity to the situation. Thanks for sharing
Quotes / Subtleties
Yeas subtleties... kinda makes you wonder why people just don't tell you instead of making it difficult all the time. Nice. Thanks for sharing
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Poetry / ecstasy
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