I understand this feeling completely, having the whole world to roam yet being trapped in my own mind; feeling like I'm being taken over by some sort of darkness. Well written, esspecially for a free verse poem.

I'm not sure why I like this so much but I do. It's very clever and you rhymed very well. It helps to show you that not everything is what it seems.

I like this, it expresses the feelings of love in a simple, clear way. It shows how much someone can truly care about another, nicely done.

I like this, how raw and clear it is. It's lacking in a chorus but I can easily look passed that conisdering how well the verses flow.

I enjoy how beautifully disturbing the imagery you're portraying is. It's completely understandable, wanting everyone else to be miserable if you are, wanting other people to feel the pain you feel and experience the grotesque situations you were forced into. Nicely written.

I love how artistically you managed to interpret such a primitive feeling, lust. I love how it is brief and detailed yet you found a way to leave us wondering and begging for more.

I know what you were going through when you wrote that, and that's important in a piece of writing. It's normal to wonder sometimes "Who have I become? Who am I, really?" Nicely written.

I love how you described your feelings. So detailed, I'm sure every reader could feel the freedom themselves.Every sense, completely aware of new surroundings. Beautifully written.

I like the humor you managed to fit into a normally upsetting situation.You can feel Celeste's frustration and it's easy to know how she feels, easy to relate to. Nicely done.

Undoubtedly the most touching, meaningful piece of writing I have ever read. A loss that not many have to deal with and only the strong have the heart to move on from. I commend you for how open you are about such a sensitive subject. I can feel your pain, your disappointment through your writing and would do anything to share this pain with you if it made it easier for you.