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LOC: Vermilion, OH
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LOC: Vermilion, OH
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: November 06
Retied educator (27 years of high school English and government and six years of teaching research writing in a junior college)
Married to the most wonderful woman in the world. (45th anniversary last June)
Two sons, one a lawyer the other a physicist.
Four grandchildren, all boys, ages 7,6,6,6.
Life is good.
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Chapter 32 A Tentative Restart Isn’t it interesting how we both remember the phone call? The details differ, but the main points are there in both recollections. When I hung up I just stood in the phone booth staring at the phone for at least ten minutes. I only left then because another student wanted to use the it. I walked back to my room, stretched out on my bed, and looked at the cracks in the ceiling. In my mind I replayed the conversation over and over. A hundred times I w...
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Chapter 32 A Tentative Restart Isn’t it interesting how we both remember the phone call? The details differ, but the main points are there in both recollections. When I hung up I just stood in the phone booth staring at the phone for at least ten minutes. I only left then because another student wanted to use the it. I walked back to my room, stretched out on my bed, and looked at the cracks in the ceiling. In my mind I replayed the conversation over and over. A hundred times I w...
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Chapter 32 A Tentative Restart Isn’t it interesting how we both remember the phone call? The details differ, but the main points are there in both recollections. When I hung up the phone I just stood in the phone booth staring at the phone for at least ten minutes. I only left then because another student wanted to use the phone. I walked back to my room, stretched out on my bed, and looked at the cracks in the ceiling. In my mind I replayed the phone conversation over and over. A hund...
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#53 Poems and Phones I spent the last few days trying to get my act together. I'm trying to find out how and why Donna and I fell in love and got married. In looking back over what I've written I'm not sure I'm doing that. Still, I think there is something here worth going on about. As sometimes happens, while I'm thinking about one writing problem I get ideas for another piece of writing all together. I'm including this poem here because it came to me over the weekend. It really belongs back...
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Chapter 30 Crisis Coming I vividly remember that day, July 23, 1962. I sat in my chair for maybe an hour reading and rereading that letter. Then I got up, dropped the letter on my desk and walked to the registrar to withdraw from Kent. I next called my parents to tell them I wasn't going to stay at Kent. Dad couldn't come to pick me up until the next day so I went back to my room and read the letter another ten or twelve times. I was cold and numb and very very scared. I didn't have a clue ...
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This is good, if a bit cynical. I do wonder if it is really poetry but that is for another discussion. You have some striping images here, and some very subtil ones too. I like the sneeringly speechless and irrefutably mistaken in particular. One suggestion: In stanza 5 the third line reads better as "we accepted BEING told nothing." That is more in the stye of the rest of the poem. As long as I am picking: What is the antecedent of "it" in the last line of stanza 5? I feel I'm missing someth...
Minor grammar point: It should be "even FEWER people to look after them" Not "LESS people" This seems to be a rather static scene. If I have the concept of what you are doing you have a phone conversation interspersed with news clips of fires and bombings. It doesn't really go anywhere. Tom knows no more at the end of the conversation than he did before it started. In fact, the things he does learn make him even more confused. The plot part is OK if you cover the missing parts in scenes after...
An, the falling dream. My own is usually off a high cliff, like the ones the Mexican cliff divers use. Two things jump out at me as I read this. First, in spite of the view you describe, there is no sense of awe. I would think that should be a major part of the whole experience. The one place you do attempt to show a sense of awe it fails because the sentence itself is flawed. To whit - "The ground looks rocky and uninhabited, another reminder of how truly small I am- how small we all are." T...
I'm always glad to find a sonnet writer. I think sonnets are one of the best discipline developers the language has. Following a very set pattern in a rhyme poor language is a challenge. I like what you do here. From the starting line modeled on one of Shakespeare's sonnets to the final rhymed couplet you hold on to the concept. And, making it even more a challenge, you do it in the negative. That is, if I have a grasp of your main line of thought. (Which briefly is, love may hurt, but it doe...
Okay, you sort of ended it. One monster gone, but the Gorya (?) is still around. Nice ending line BTW. Somehow Cain with a basket of rolls struck me as funny. I did wonder why both Trec and Nash were so worn out after what seemed only a little effort. Otherwise, thiss wasn't bad. Not yet of publishable quality, but worth working on. (I meean the whole series, not just this one entry.)
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