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LOC: NY, NY
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LAST LOGIN: August 13
LOC: NY, NY
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And now I'm mixed between the two Stuck between her and once again you Her with her touch & sensuality so strong You with your words that play in my head like a song. Your honesty, Her lies, they battle one another in my mind. Running through this maze of thoughts yet no exit do i find. Reaching out for help from others but they have not a clue So I'm sitting here once again thinking of what to do. I'm at the bottom of a hole I dug myself... I cant see either one of you with someone else... I...
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For the 'Six-Word Memoirs about the Creative Life' i dont see why this wouldnt fit right in. =]
I really loved reading this. Personally, ive always wanted to just lay in grass and not have to worry about anyone coming and disturbing my peace there. This just made me want to know more about Jonathan and Kendra like how they got together, things they did before this day,etc. Really nice.
I would definitly use this. Its a strong line and has a lot packed behind it. Thanks for sharing.
My favorite line is the ending 'And i am afraid/When people say I scare them.' That sounds really strong to me. I liked the used of similies as well. Thanks for sharing.
This is humorous so you completed what you were aiming for. =]
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